Jonas brothers poem!!?!
Question: Jonas brothers poem!!!?
Could you tell me if this is any good!? Suggestions would be helpful too!!
Oh My Jonas
At last, the fateful night has come
When I see them
Oh, when I see them
What will become of me
Will I scream or plead
It's all the same to them
But I'll be forever changed
All the songs memorized by heart,
The both of us
But when the music starts
My excitment comes
They burst into rocking
Balled number 1
It's "burning up"
The crowd goes wild
We're all so obsessed
Watching them prancing
In our eyes, the best
They own the stage
Then they're finally done
Wait, I thought they just started
Best night of my life
I'm so glad I got to come
It's my first real poem so if it's bad just tell me how to improve please!Www@Enter-QA@Com
Oh My Jonas
At last, the fateful night has come
When I see them
Oh, when I see them
What will become of me
Will I scream or plead
It's all the same to them
But I'll be forever changed
All the songs memorized by heart,
The both of us
But when the music starts
My excitment comes
They burst into rocking
Balled number 1
It's "burning up"
The crowd goes wild
We're all so obsessed
Watching them prancing
In our eyes, the best
They own the stage
Then they're finally done
Wait, I thought they just started
Best night of my life
I'm so glad I got to come
It's my first real poem so if it's bad just tell me how to improve please!Www@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
sweety this is a great poem!. :)
plz make more!. u have talent!. :)Www@Enter-QA@Com
plz make more!. u have talent!. :)Www@Enter-QA@Com
i love that poem! its amazingly cool!
the jonas brothers truly are amazing!
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the jonas brothers truly are amazing!
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Jonas Brothers
Why does everyone like you!?
You sing like doo-doo
Your guitarist is trash
Your bassist's playing is rash
Yet everyone likes you
Except me
Took about 5 secs to make that poem!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Why does everyone like you!?
You sing like doo-doo
Your guitarist is trash
Your bassist's playing is rash
Yet everyone likes you
Except me
Took about 5 secs to make that poem!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
koolio,!.!.!.at least someones thinkin what im think,lol!. this is good!.!.really good!. i wrote a jb poem n read it some people awhile ago n everyone was so confused like "was the jonas!.!?!" lol!.!.!.!.,but i guess its just a jb thing!.!.!.as always ;)Www@Enter-QA@Com
That is really good! I love how it's descriptive and the poem itself gets you excited! You have a great talent there so keep up the good work!Www@Enter-QA@Com
Jonas Brothers:
You suck so bad
you are pathetic
you embarrass me
only 12 year old girls like you
you are gayWww@Enter-QA@Com
You suck so bad
you are pathetic
you embarrass me
only 12 year old girls like you
you are gayWww@Enter-QA@Com
It is okayWww@Enter-QA@Com
I like itWww@Enter-QA@Com
this is a good poemWww@Enter-QA@Com
one word!.
gayWww@Enter-QA@Com
gayWww@Enter-QA@Com
this is a great poem! it shows just how much u love them :)Www@Enter-QA@Com
Cute!.
I don't really like the Jonas Brothers!.
But I think it could use a bit more description!. Other than that, not bad for a first poem!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
I don't really like the Jonas Brothers!.
But I think it could use a bit more description!. Other than that, not bad for a first poem!.Www@Enter-QA@Com