Rate if you like this (1-10), thanks?!


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Rate if you like this (1-10), thanks?

under the blue sky,
standing at the street with a smiling face,
that's what i always show you,
and that's what you always seen in me,
the sorrow that's hidden behind me,
the wound that still bleeding,
a thorn stabbed inside so deep,
a pain memory chasing me every second, everyday,
a regret that won't let me go,
i tried to buried,
but there still an ugly scar that can't erase,
i let the tears float,
i reach out my hand,
but i can't catch any hand,
i saw shadow standing beside,
i can only felt grey and cold surrounding me,
im scared, im lost,
i can't yell, and i can't move,
coz im rotten at the ground of hatred and regrets.

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23 hours ago
correct me if got any wrong word used.

2 hours ago
thanks for everyone who rated, i only took 5 minutes to wrote this poem ( actually i don't know can i call this poem or what), so i didn't check my vocabulary or any wrong word been used, but thanks anyway who help in correction.


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10 baby


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