Is my sprite comic ok?!
Question: Well some critique will be nice and please read the whole 8 pages! I have improved over the comic's progression!
http://www.drunkduck.com/Pokemon_Coal/in...
Answers: Well some critique will be nice and please read the whole 8 pages! I have improved over the comic's progression!
http://www.drunkduck.com/Pokemon_Coal/in...
I think it is great how it is now. You can change some same details but don't change it that much.
I think it's okay overall. It does have few humors to it, but try to add more. Also, take out some things like Megaman, since.... um... it doesn't make any sense... Make some pictures like the title page to better quality (I was about to stop reading when I saw the first page, but didn't).
Besides...
He'll never become Pokemon Master with a mushroom... xD