Is this Naruto OC a Mary-Sue?!
Question: Hey there. I was wondering... do you think this character is a Mary-Sue? I was going to put her in a Naruto fan-fic but... I need to know.
Name: Chikako, Tawainai
Age: 14
Looks: Average, short, brown hair, blue-green eyes.
Other stuffs: She's a neko(cat-girl), is Sasuke and Itachi's sister, and has sharingan(though she can't use it well)
So... what do you think? Too Mary-Sue-ish?
Answers: Hey there. I was wondering... do you think this character is a Mary-Sue? I was going to put her in a Naruto fan-fic but... I need to know.
Name: Chikako, Tawainai
Age: 14
Looks: Average, short, brown hair, blue-green eyes.
Other stuffs: She's a neko(cat-girl), is Sasuke and Itachi's sister, and has sharingan(though she can't use it well)
So... what do you think? Too Mary-Sue-ish?
I think that it's a tad on the mary-sue side.. Maybe try and eliminate either the neko aspect or the sister of the Uchiha. It's a good character design tho, a bit more detail and intricate information (like, some elaboration on her past, maybe throw in a bit of extra jaz like weird hobbys etc.) and she'll be good to go. :3 Carpe diem~! I wish you luck on writing a good fan-fic. ^^
Give us some of her personality/abilities?
or maybe try:
http://springhole.net/quizzes/marysue.ht...
Err... what?
I personally think this is a Mary-Sue. Anyone that is the main character's sister / brother / family member / whatever is definitely one. Plus she's a neko-girl (do Uchihas have neko-children?), and has no resemblance to some other Uchihas - you know, black hair, black eyes?
Please, separate her from the Uchiha siblings. She's not fit to be one of them. >_>