Here is a brand new manga idea it is so awesome?!


Question: so a 5 year old boy named max and his 15 yearold brother kratos hear a crash at night.max wakes up and says brother what was that?his brother says he will go and check and it turns out a demon looking thing slashes maxs dad in his chest.then kratos yells dad then the demon trows kratos too the wall.then another demon says where is the boy and thier mom says leave us alone and then the demon says die and jabs her in the chest.kratos runs and gets max and the head into the unknown.plz tell me ure true thoughts and yeah i can drw really good


Answers: so a 5 year old boy named max and his 15 yearold brother kratos hear a crash at night.max wakes up and says brother what was that?his brother says he will go and check and it turns out a demon looking thing slashes maxs dad in his chest.then kratos yells dad then the demon trows kratos too the wall.then another demon says where is the boy and thier mom says leave us alone and then the demon says die and jabs her in the chest.kratos runs and gets max and the head into the unknown.plz tell me ure true thoughts and yeah i can drw really good

This would be a good manga, especially leaving me with question inside my head. What do they want with Max? Does he have a purpose? Who is the main protagonist on your manga, Kratos or Max? lol! Too many thoughts in my head, but that's what a good manga is all about, the mystery in it.

Keep on going, I want to read your manga!(badly)

Something to improve.. hmm...
Well you could actually explain the existence of these demons you mentioned, and what kind of creature is Max. Sort of like what Bleach and Shakugan no Shana did. Without much info, it would be confusing...

Like this
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UVa32euRm...

wow
f***in wow....
Kratos lol srry my honnest opions on kratos...
lol kratos

The last part "gets max and the head into the unknow" is not undestandalbe. What happens? Change it alittle make it so it doesnt just "pile on like that" make it more mysterious. Maybe you can make it how he gets gcaught up in something with demons and what happens i their world. Maybe something like an apocalypse is desending upon earth . Either way make it different. Change how it starts you can't just make a story all bloody and gory and have it start off bad and not make sense or readers will just asume your psychotic or something but you can make it really gory/dark {not to much though]and people will love it if it has a good stroy line.

Carrots

so far it sound good ,but demons ranomly come there gotta be a story behind that.



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