Tell me what you think of my manga idea!!?!
Question: Alex isn’t the most popular guy in town, but not the least popular kid either. He;s pretty normal ( on what levels?!?!?!?). He has friends and he has his enimeys. He loves fantasy things, and martial arts but he don’t geeky like a lot of people like this. He trains, worksoout. For what? He doenst no.. he want to get stronger. Just a feeling he has…He collects swords, and other weapons.
His dad is dead…He does not know how he was just reported….(missing). He lives with his mom, alex is 14 years old. He comes home from school one day, the day was normal. As hes walking home he sees a dark spot in the sky. But nobody else seems to notice… The next day he goes to school…Nobody is there..He is no frighten…He roams the halls in search for something living. All of a sudden a shadow appears in front of him. He looks behind him and finds a monster. He escapes somehow..Goes home and grabs a katana, prepairs himself for whats about to come.. Eventually he slays the best.
Answers: Alex isn’t the most popular guy in town, but not the least popular kid either. He;s pretty normal ( on what levels?!?!?!?). He has friends and he has his enimeys. He loves fantasy things, and martial arts but he don’t geeky like a lot of people like this. He trains, worksoout. For what? He doenst no.. he want to get stronger. Just a feeling he has…He collects swords, and other weapons.
His dad is dead…He does not know how he was just reported….(missing). He lives with his mom, alex is 14 years old. He comes home from school one day, the day was normal. As hes walking home he sees a dark spot in the sky. But nobody else seems to notice… The next day he goes to school…Nobody is there..He is no frighten…He roams the halls in search for something living. All of a sudden a shadow appears in front of him. He looks behind him and finds a monster. He escapes somehow..Goes home and grabs a katana, prepairs himself for whats about to come.. Eventually he slays the best.
Sounds fairly generic to me, some suggestions, dear;
Please, please, please give a logical reason for having katanas in his house.
Don't use 'good vs. evil' theme, that plot is so overused I'll bash my face in next time I see it.
Please don't make his dad dead unless it's a plot point, tragic hero stories are lame.
Take out the descendant part, people tend to like the 'everybody can be a hero' thing better.
And, um, the training for no apparent reason part is kind of...bleh. :/
Meant to be CC, not discouraging you or anything. xD
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well i din't read it all cos it got boring when you started editing it
but you should like stik with it but then make him scared when he runs home and then hes like what should i do and then he sees the katana and hes sweating and then he sees the monster grabs it after the monster is atacking him and kills him and finds out that he has to be like a demon slayer for some reason you'll make up
i hope you take my advice=)
This actually sounds pretty interesting, but if I could make a suggestion...
um, instead of having him, you know, just running home and putting on a katana and stuff, have him still run home, but a little scared. Then have some type of magical guru tell him what he has to do.
All in all, it sounds very interesting. ^-^
I also think that the person above me idea sounds very good. ^-^
Hm...Could use a bit of editing and revising, but has a lot of potential. I like it.
I find it interesting that the main character won't have a MAJOR advantage in the story when defeating these monsters. It's going to make the story much better. (No one likes reading about an annoying brat with superpowers *cough*Naruto*cough* JK I like Naruto.)
I think...he shouldnt be collecting swords..hmm.. I dunno.
It seems a bit too unrealistic, no? Maybe you should have him...I dunno...grab something like a weapon and kill the monster...?
Anyway, I like it. Keep up the good work.
just as a comment
i think he should pick up a few friends who help him and know about it too
also when he sees a shadow in the sky, someone should be like following him as if seeing his reaction
when he defeats the monster, the guy/girl shows up again and says something like IDK.............
anyways
he should go through a few hardships like ppl calling him crazy for collecting swords
nobody really does that, no offense.
the plot itself could use some editing
however, overall it is good
im making a comic book myself
GOOD LUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i like the idea
here are just some ideas
have it that he is made to train for a purpose that no will tell him that his mum wont let him stop even tho he may enjoy it an want to get stronger he couldn't stop if he wanted to
that his mum is not really his mum an that why she makes him train coz she know what is going to happen
have his dad be missing but make sure there is a reason why later down the track ... yes its been used a lot but then just make sure it a good twist or that he is dead but was killed by the people he is fighting
have a reason why he grabs the katana like feels a bond with is compared to the other weapons
maybe after he fights the Shadow an win have the lady posing as his mum come out an explain what has just happened an why to him an no on else
these are just ideas that come to me
good luck with it tho it sounds really cool