A good manga story?!
Question: i have this idea of a boy named Leon Stryker who has no memories of where he came from or his family. The year in the future.Leon gets some powers to shot beams and stuff( like in dragonball z) ,he and his friend Hageo Trindad go with a superhero Captain (who gave them there power) to take his place for when he's gone.They go on many crazy adventures until Hageo betrays the team and a couple years later Captain gets killed leaveing Leon to become Superboy( the title). The first part ends with Leon facing a mysterious boy who nearly kills Leon.Leon uses his last bit of energy to go into space and explode. Part two is years later like in naruto's time skip where it reveal more of his life, family, and his war against a mass company planning on taking over the universe. Part three is takes place further in Leon life as an adult(mid 20s) and his fights against the last of the universe's threat. IF this sounds good i'll put up a sample of it soon
Answers: i have this idea of a boy named Leon Stryker who has no memories of where he came from or his family. The year in the future.Leon gets some powers to shot beams and stuff( like in dragonball z) ,he and his friend Hageo Trindad go with a superhero Captain (who gave them there power) to take his place for when he's gone.They go on many crazy adventures until Hageo betrays the team and a couple years later Captain gets killed leaveing Leon to become Superboy( the title). The first part ends with Leon facing a mysterious boy who nearly kills Leon.Leon uses his last bit of energy to go into space and explode. Part two is years later like in naruto's time skip where it reveal more of his life, family, and his war against a mass company planning on taking over the universe. Part three is takes place further in Leon life as an adult(mid 20s) and his fights against the last of the universe's threat. IF this sounds good i'll put up a sample of it soon
it is pretty good
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So. Where's your originality with this?
I can't even get through to the plot with all the bad grammar/formatting.
Also, titles like 'superboy' are wack.
There's nothing special about this idea.