Does anyone want to read a manga story that my friend and me created or trying t!


Question: the two first chapters of our manga is in script form still, but the story is the best thing we have created. Its on http://www.ficwad.com/story/92332 my friend the co-author posted it on ficwad and I want more people to see our work and I wanted to surprise him with all the people who read our story so please read our story and come back to me and tell me how it was. thank you please write a review at fic wad my friend would love that as well as I. and for the ones hoping a full manga, it's not because it's a script story; just words but we have characters already created and drawn out but we wanted to know if our story was good with other people so we can continue. thanks again


Answers: the two first chapters of our manga is in script form still, but the story is the best thing we have created. Its on http://www.ficwad.com/story/92332 my friend the co-author posted it on ficwad and I want more people to see our work and I wanted to surprise him with all the people who read our story so please read our story and come back to me and tell me how it was. thank you please write a review at fic wad my friend would love that as well as I. and for the ones hoping a full manga, it's not because it's a script story; just words but we have characters already created and drawn out but we wanted to know if our story was good with other people so we can continue. thanks again

I did not read the entire thing because I would be left wanting more. From what I read I liked it and would want to see it put together if you finish it. Just one thing ...."Devil-human" please name them something different, you can associate them as a devil-human, but give them a name, as if they were a clan or something.

can you please shorten the story I'm too lazy to read so much

Great... Though I think you should stop describing Jessie as "the emerald-eyed girl" or calling Sai "the Devil Human"... Frankly, it's really used... Try using other describing words/phrases...
And maybe Sai should have some weakness too... You wouldn't want him to turn to a mary-sue, would ya...?

Reading the summary is good enough. And the title for each part is good.Though,it' probably hard to make it a manga, for it's more much of a book, describing the environment narrativeley. I mean, mangas are more of scripts,yes?



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