?HELP!!!!!! Most important question C&A has EVER encountered......?!
Question: I need help on one of my fanfiction characters. NO! Don't just leave yet. please answer it.^^ I know that not a lot of the C&A regulars on here like answering questions that have to do with fanfiction help && stuff but pleaaasee stay. Mizutoki begs for your presence.
Anyway, I need help on making a childhood story for one of my characters in a fanfiction for the story Naruto. He has no clan left && has no relatives [that he knows of.]
he has photographic memory but still doesn't remember anything from around the time his clan fell. i dont have anything to why his clan has fallen. && my character doesn't know much about his clan either.
Overall, I need a childhood background information thingy for a Naruto character [fanfict], that has no relatives left.
if you wanna know more about him just visit his already made biography:
His name is Mizutoki Shinen.
[the first character listed.^^]
[ran out of characters.....wait for 'add details']
^^
Answers: I need help on one of my fanfiction characters. NO! Don't just leave yet. please answer it.^^ I know that not a lot of the C&A regulars on here like answering questions that have to do with fanfiction help && stuff but pleaaasee stay. Mizutoki begs for your presence.
Anyway, I need help on making a childhood story for one of my characters in a fanfiction for the story Naruto. He has no clan left && has no relatives [that he knows of.]
he has photographic memory but still doesn't remember anything from around the time his clan fell. i dont have anything to why his clan has fallen. && my character doesn't know much about his clan either.
Overall, I need a childhood background information thingy for a Naruto character [fanfict], that has no relatives left.
if you wanna know more about him just visit his already made biography:
His name is Mizutoki Shinen.
[the first character listed.^^]
[ran out of characters.....wait for 'add details']
^^
okay so here we go (sorry if its long or not)
when you were born, your father left from your mother and brother- he was skitzaphrenic and and was very curropted- he only married your mother becasue she came from one of the most secretive clans ever- her clan consisted of people who were boen "extremly" gifted, (smarter then Kakashi's father :P) your father only married your mother becasue- he wanted to "reproduce" and becasue he was from a clan of elamints ( were you were litteraly better then anyone else in the world with elmaints and there were onl 5 every centuray) and wanted to make the BEST fighter ever- able to surpass the Lich King ( i donno that all i can think of- you can change the name if you want) the lich King was undefeatable- he was the as though the kings of life- he couldn;t die, and was more powerful than you can imgain (this charicter is made from Warcraft though i like the idea- searh google"Lich King" and look for a biography on him to get the idea) anyways, your father married your mother so that he coul make "the" smartest person- seeing as your mother was from the clan she was.. your father was so obbsesed with gaining the thrown of the King that he forced his way to marying your mother though he manipulated your mother to think she was in love when your brother was born he was missing these smarts that your father so desperatly wanted so he decided to wait for another son. when you were bron, you were just perfent- you looked exactly like your dad and had all of his specailt stregths x10 and your mother expressive eyes (the only thing that resembles her) and her intellects x10- so you were litterealy unstoppable- but you wern;t born te way your father intended- you had many"problems"- you had his skitzaphreneya and you would black out easly and many other problem and health condition (jsut make any on your own- if you want it that is) so threw sheer hatred your father killed your mother right in front of you when you were 4- so your brother raised you- untill your father killed him aswell..
you were tooken to an orphanige where 2 men saw you and took you for your "attributes" to the most ellite school of fighting (also secretive) where you were worked to the bone and then told what to do how to do.. and almost treated like a slave... becasue you were so girfted and your brother had trained you so strictly you exelled in the school so quickly that they threw you out saying that they would be expecting you back when you were old enough to teach.. time passes by and now you are were you are (meaning this is your part of the story you make up :P) and your fathers head is still unkown- you don;t knwo wether he is dead or alive and you don;t care- you jsut want to live your life the way that you (meaing Mizutoki) intend to write it
weeew lol- now you know what i do when i say "fantasize"
Dude you should so use something kinda of like Sasukes you know his brother killed his whole clan and left only him but in ur story after he kills the clan he could hit ur character over the head really hard making him forget everything that happened to his clan and only know that they are dead or just gone or they could get like captured and he could just lose his memory when they like run off they knock him down or something
nope scratch sasuke
who about he killed his own clan without knowing that he did and then finally he's remembering
Didn't read the Additional Details. But, adoptions are always interesting! The character could discover that he was adopted and then he'd have to deal with all the resulting conflicts. You could tie in unlikely or mysterious relatives. Maybe the kid was originally in another opposing clan? I think that gives you a lot of options.
mizu i love that avy!!!
what if he had an ability that he didn't kno about and when his clan got attacked he subconciously used this ability and wiped out every one including his clan but he doesn't remember doing anything
Don't make the guys clan die by one of his family members. That's a bit cliched. Okay his clan should be wiped off.. by a demon (9-tailed fox?) or just a regular ninja who wanted to gain power by destroying the mighty clan of Shinen (not sure if thats his first name or last name... Im just assuming its his last name)... If Mizutoki's clan died by the 9-tailed fox, he should find out later somehow and he should hold a grudge against Naruto. So then like he tries to kill Naruto or at least somehow find a way to kill the beast without harming Naruto much. If you use the second option, Mizutoki should have a pursuit to finding more information about this killer dude. So maybe he should be like a spy or something. And he should find out that the killer dude is using someone from his clan or something. and Now he feels like he has to save that family member, but he/she is being stubborn and he/she wants to protect the killer person. And the killer person uses Mizutoki's relative as his advantage by using him/her as a sheild/weapon. Hopefully I helped or gave you some ideas.
Ok maybe His clan was attacked by a ravenous disease that no one knew about. He did not have it though. When hes older he cannot remeber what happend to his clan so he thinks he accidentally killed them along time ago.
im sorry if that was bad, i lack the creative genes ><
I was thinking since it says that they can take the memories of the people they touch or something like that. Maybe a strong member of the clan touched him and removed all his memories about his clan's demise. For me it seems like there would be a lot of stuff that you could base of that.
Maybe the person was trying to take the pain away or trying to make sure he didn't remember the certain person and try to avenge his clan.
*yawn......*
I feel like skipping this question, but ah well.......
......Wait, didn't you ask this question before? =/
(like long time ago?)
http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;...
Go find some answers that have to do with no orphans (like mine) and go see if you can somehow use that ideas into your own...
you're a D!CK
OOOOOHH YOU GOT F'd IN THE EAR BETCH!!!!
MWAHAHAHAHA!!!!!
1) one day, his clan just disappears. he remembers all the members of his clan (their faces, their personality, etc.) but for some reason no one ELSE remembers them.
it's like they never existed.
like they've been erased from everyones memories.
he starts to doubt himself, thinking that maybe he just imagined having a clan (after all, everyone else tells him that he's been an orphan all his life)- until one day he finds a _____ [insert significant object here]
the search for answers about his past begins...
DAN DAN DANNNNNNN (dramatic music)
LOL. i don't know, i was bored. it was fun though xD
good luck ^^
Aww I wish I could help, but I have not watched enough Naruto yet! But I wish you luck on your fan fiction..it sounds like you have a good plot set up starting..stories about memory loss are really interesting