ANIME FANS ONLY! which is a better comic relief for my manga?!
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when Lara enters local beauty contests and forces the guys to get her clothes and makeup and hair dryer and ordering them around while the guys don't know what they're doing
or
Tsukiyomi before every battle sees Tsukuyomi and flirts with her every time?
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when Lara enters local beauty contests and forces the guys to get her clothes and makeup and hair dryer and ordering them around while the guys don't know what they're doing
or
Tsukiyomi before every battle sees Tsukuyomi and flirts with her every time?
i love them bolth but the one about lara's make up is so funny! i say lara's make up story
the second one sounds like it would make a positive difference but things like that have been done millions of times in millions of different shows so i don't know
i still like the second one more
You characters seem to be traces of characters from official anime's. Just wanted to tell you that's illegal.
Kinfuyu Daigo. He just looks like the sarcastic type to me. :D Is he?
The first one doesnt really flow. The second one is much better becuase it flows and is understndable and it will get more people to look at it. :D (I read Animes all the time!)
lara sounds like my sister evil evil.....EVIL!!!!!!
O.O Tsukiyomi is a guy?! i thought he was a girl.. just the hair throws it off.. it really depends on where you story is going to go.. you cant jjust think about one part at a time.. well yea.. and i dont get the plot that much sorry.. but the characters look good. but whos tsukiyomi.. and tsukuyomi? well the characters look ok.. just needa add more details.. =) pretty good and good luck on your anime/manga
wow i like it make more man awsome.