Is this a good story i made?!


Question: Is this a good story i made!?
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Shadow
its about a 22 year old who screws everything up!. He gets beat up alot!. until one day when he was walking through a dark alley, a guy jumps him, and pushes him against the wall!. while holding his fist out to punch shadow (the main guy's name) his fist is glowing!. he then punches shadow, and knocks him out cold!. He woke up with super powers!. he gets beat up too many times, so one day he snaps!. He runs away crying, and sees on the tv in a bar, that a big monster attacked his town from where he ran from!. The tv also said the monster had captured a young girl!. Showing a picture of the girl he loves!. He goes back to his town and finds his love severly injured!. and the monster comes up and slams his fist onto Shadow!. He wakes up later a week later in a hospital bed!. The nurse says the monster disappeared, and he talks to his love!. Then gets beat up again by her boyfriend!. and thats a description of itWww@Enter-QA@Com


Answers:
Thats really good dude!!! I loved it! I would love to hear the rest! Would you email me the rest!? =) Its awesome! I'm not lying either! It sounds like a more modern Superman kind of story, but way better!!! Great Job hon!!! *hugs* =DWww@Enter-QA@Com

he seems to get beat up a lot for a 22 year old!.!.!. He should play a punk kind of character if he gets into so much trouble with people all the time!.!.!. And the story line seems average!.!.!. like spiderman or something!.Www@Enter-QA@Com

its realy nice!.!.!.why is shadow always get beaten up alot and the girl he likes has a boyfriend!.!!?
hehehe i like it!! the plot is niceWww@Enter-QA@Com

why is he keep getting beat upWww@Enter-QA@Com



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