I am making a cartoon show;what do you think of this one?!


Question: I am making a cartoon show;what do you think of this one!?
here is the summary!.!.!.!.

two mutant rats who used to be lab rats!. one scientist accidentally spilles a strange chemical into the 2 rats food!.while the 2 rats were eating they transformed into mutant rats!. the scientist whent crazy and tried to get famous off of them!.the rats didn't like him at all so they escaped from the crazy scientist!.they travel far away to find a new home!.hopefuly without crazy scientists!.they end up in an alley for a day then moved on!.the rats find a woman ,named alex, who wasshopping for groceries!.while alex puts the groceries in the car trunk , the 2 rats sneak in the trunk unoticed!. alex drives home and unpackes!. while she does the rats sneak into the house still unnoticed!.when alex finishes she goes back to the house!. she then finds them eating the food she bought!.she gets scared!. the rats explianed to her what was going on!.she understands and promises to take care of them and protect them from the scientist , who they belive are stiill looking for them!.Www@Enter-QA@Com


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sounds like a cartoon from the 90's
That's a pretty cliche first episode!. The rats should do something besides hide !.!.!. Like fight crime! Scratch that!.!.!. They Should Attend professional Cup-stacking tournaments!.
They then make a cheese enthusiasts club!. Where they will meet A Witty French-man!. He will teach the rats the ways of cup-stacking and Woo-ing ratsWww@Enter-QA@Com

it sounds to much like pinkey and the brain!. it just not creative enough!. you have a good idea going for you but there needs to be more to it!.Www@Enter-QA@Com

lol seems kinda like a funny comedy/echhi cartoon to me!. but it dose sound good side note: try maybe an evil company out to kill/capture them and add a twist like she works for themWww@Enter-QA@Com

I don' know!.!.!.It kinda sounds like Secret of NIMH meets Pinky and the Brain!.!.!.!.good idea!.!.!.just rethink the rats!.!.!.!.Www@Enter-QA@Com

teenage mutant ninja rats!?
edit: The chemical part sounds like Power Puff Girls!.!.!.Www@Enter-QA@Com



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