Please i need opinions on my hero i created please help!?!
Question: Please i need opinions on my hero i created please help!!?
i have created a hero/villian person and want to know what you think of it\
My hero is a Teenag girl who is not very like able!. everyone hates her!. One day she was at her fathers work!. He works at a science lab!. She was messing with this bottle that had one blue side and one red side!. Someone came running by and hit her so she poured it all on her self!. She tryed to wipe it off but it didnt work!. When she got home one side of her burned and one side of her was freezing!. i will skip s little and it ends up her having the power of fire and ice!. One side is fire one is ice!. She can also turn into an ice woman or a fire woman!. She is not very heroic but suddenly that changes!. What do you think and what would be a good name!?Www@Enter-QA@Com
My hero is a Teenag girl who is not very like able!. everyone hates her!. One day she was at her fathers work!. He works at a science lab!. She was messing with this bottle that had one blue side and one red side!. Someone came running by and hit her so she poured it all on her self!. She tryed to wipe it off but it didnt work!. When she got home one side of her burned and one side of her was freezing!. i will skip s little and it ends up her having the power of fire and ice!. One side is fire one is ice!. She can also turn into an ice woman or a fire woman!. She is not very heroic but suddenly that changes!. What do you think and what would be a good name!?Www@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
First off a name: Gaia, a Goddess of the Earth!. She chooses this name because the Earth is comprised of both Fire and Water!. Part of what makes her an outcast is her love of mythology hence the selection of her name!.
As for how she gains her powers, the person bumping into her should be someone who is stealing company secrets and ultimately leads to her father's death!. She becomes more sociable because she has to search for her father's killer!. Once sucessful, she continues to use her power's for good!.
This is a good start to a possibly very interesting character!. She has the potential to be flawed, but can grow and change!. It is a good attempt at something!. I like the way she gains her powers, but you need a reason as to why her father was working on those chemical compounds!.
Keep it up and don't get discouraged!. I have been working at my characters for 10 years now and have not really made progress!. Hope you do better!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
As for how she gains her powers, the person bumping into her should be someone who is stealing company secrets and ultimately leads to her father's death!. She becomes more sociable because she has to search for her father's killer!. Once sucessful, she continues to use her power's for good!.
This is a good start to a possibly very interesting character!. She has the potential to be flawed, but can grow and change!. It is a good attempt at something!. I like the way she gains her powers, but you need a reason as to why her father was working on those chemical compounds!.
Keep it up and don't get discouraged!. I have been working at my characters for 10 years now and have not really made progress!. Hope you do better!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
I love the fire and ice idea, and I love the fact that she's not very likeable!.
I don't think it's realistic to assume that just because she got superpowers, she would change!. Perhaps!.!.!.something else happens as well, something to her dad!?
And, the spilling of blue and red chemicals on herself to get the powers is just!.!.!.lame!. Sorry!.!.!.it's super-lame!. Find something that's not so cliche!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
I don't think it's realistic to assume that just because she got superpowers, she would change!. Perhaps!.!.!.something else happens as well, something to her dad!?
And, the spilling of blue and red chemicals on herself to get the powers is just!.!.!.lame!. Sorry!.!.!.it's super-lame!. Find something that's not so cliche!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Nice concept although having these two physical properties might create some conflicts like she cant use them both mostly at a given instance (e!.g!. freezing the villain then blasting it with fire as a finishing move) so i suggest that she can channel these powers through weapons (like ice sword or fire sword) for better usage of power (though she can perform them as power blasts too)!. for the title how about = zero inferno or zero cypherWww@Enter-QA@Com