Is this 20 second cartoon/animation any good?!
Question: Is this 20 second cartoon/animation any good!?
Okay, so I made this out of sheer boredom, and I was just wondering if it's any good!.!.!. I'm asking this so I can get feedback and see what I should fix and how!.
This is my first video that includes animation, and I want to get much better, so any feedback would be great!
(I am not doing this to get more views, I seriously want to know how I can improve)
here is the video: http://www!.youtube!.com/watch!?v=-dGRquobH!.!.!.
Thanks a lot in advance =DWww@Enter-QA@Com
This is my first video that includes animation, and I want to get much better, so any feedback would be great!
(I am not doing this to get more views, I seriously want to know how I can improve)
here is the video: http://www!.youtube!.com/watch!?v=-dGRquobH!.!.!.
Thanks a lot in advance =DWww@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
well I like the sparta voice over and you did make the cicle animation match the voice articulation pretty good!. Maybe next time bring the character up higher on the page and draw simple backgrounds for it!. Outside of that it was nice!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
That was barely animation!. Here, go read up on some basic animation principles!.
http://www!.idleworm!.com/how/index!.shtml
http://www!.awn!.com/tooninstitute/lessonp!.!.!.
http://www!.animationarchive!.org/2006/05/!.!.!.
http://www!.animationarchive!.org/2006/05/!.!.!.
http://www!.karmatoons!.com/drawing/1a!.htm
http://www!.animationarena!.com/principles!.!.!.
http://www!.animationmeat!.com/notes/notes!.!.!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
http://www!.idleworm!.com/how/index!.shtml
http://www!.awn!.com/tooninstitute/lessonp!.!.!.
http://www!.animationarchive!.org/2006/05/!.!.!.
http://www!.animationarchive!.org/2006/05/!.!.!.
http://www!.karmatoons!.com/drawing/1a!.htm
http://www!.animationarena!.com/principles!.!.!.
http://www!.animationmeat!.com/notes/notes!.!.!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Well, it's obviously a single circle talking, but if that's what you're going for, it's well done!.Www@Enter-QA@Com