Rate my anime story (Sakura Neko part 1 chapter 4)!
Question: Rate my anime story (Sakura Neko part 1 chapter 4)
Ok i promise this part will b better than the last one,lol :]
Naomi was very curious about the 'secret',she spent all day thinking about it!.But on her way to school she was more concerned about what was gonna happen to herself!.!.!.'Why wont Aunt Kimiko tell me about the secret!.!.!.But what about me!?Will i change back again!?!?!?And if I do than when will I!?"Naomi couldnt think,she looked down and squinted her eyes till they closed and tried not to think about it!."Naomi!?"A voice asked from a few feet in front of her!.She looked up!.
"Kaito!.!.!.oh its you!"Naomi said smiling!.Kaito walked up to her and offered to walk her to school!. "Sure,I would love it!."Naomi replied!. "Hey Kaito!?"Naomi asked!. "Yeah!?"he said staring at the girl!. "Um!.!.!.how come you!.!.!.huged me!.!."Naomi asked blushing a little!. Kaito grinned and looked up at the sky with his arms behind his head!."Because you actualy listened to me!.!.!."He said!. "No one ever wants to listen to me,i guess cuz it depresses them!.!.or they just only care about themselves!.!.!."Kaito finished!. "Naomi,when i first met you i knew you werent ike many other people!.!." "really!.!.!.!?"Naomi said turning a bright red!. Kaito closed his eyes and let the sun soak his skin!.He was beautiful,not just that but he cared for Naomi!. Naomi felt herself blush,and not just that she felt something else!.!.!.
'OH NO!MY TAIL!'Naomi thought in a panic,she quickly heled onto her bell and focused!.Her tail disapeard!."phew!.!."naomi whispered to herself!. Naomi and Kaito had just walked into the school,when of cousre Yumi scared Naomi half to death!.!.!."HI NAO!!!!!"Yumi said jumping on Naomi from behind!. "How come you didnt call me yesturday!?"Yumi said still on top of Naomi's back!. "I feel asleep!.!.NOW GET OF ME!"Naomi said angrly,but giggling a little bit!. "sorry,buuuut guess what!?NEW STUDENTS!" Yumi grabbed Naomi and dragged them both to class!.
"Today,we are going to meet some very special new students!"Said Sensei Mizuki!. "These are two exchange students all the way from America!We had them in a class that taught them japanese so feel free to speak with them anytime!.Welcome Carolyn and Steven!."She said!. "Oh please call me Karorinu,I love my name in japanese!."Carolyn said,she seemed kinda shy!. "Same for me,call me Suchibu!."Steve said!. "Ok,well please give a welcome to Karorinu-chan and Suchibu-kun!" Everyones eyes were fixed on the two,they were different but gorgeous at the same time!.!.!.Naomi even had her eyes fixed on them!.Karorinu had the most beautiful orange hair she had ever seen,she was so used to dark hair seeing her hair was kind of shocking!.And Suchibu had the most beautiful eyes,so blue and so clear!.!.!. It seemed Kaito didnt really seem to care,he just sat there writing in a red and black notebook!.'What if Kaito saw me!.!.I hope I didnt hurt his feelings!.!.!.'Naomi thought!. Suchibu and Karorinu were about to take their seats,Karorinu had a seat in the middle a row of desks away from Naomi!.But Suchibu was 3 desks away from Naomi!.Just as Suchibu walked past Naomi he brushed her hand with his long slim fingers,he looked at Naomi,smiling he winked at her!.Naomi just sat there,confused!.She looked at Kaito,he quickly stopped looking at her and went back to lookng in his book!.He ripped out a page and set it back in his book!. Naomi felt her face turn red again,she didnt know what was happening but she wasnt sure she liked it!.!.!.!.!.!.
~To be continued in part 2 chapter 4~Www@Enter-QA@Com
Naomi was very curious about the 'secret',she spent all day thinking about it!.But on her way to school she was more concerned about what was gonna happen to herself!.!.!.'Why wont Aunt Kimiko tell me about the secret!.!.!.But what about me!?Will i change back again!?!?!?And if I do than when will I!?"Naomi couldnt think,she looked down and squinted her eyes till they closed and tried not to think about it!."Naomi!?"A voice asked from a few feet in front of her!.She looked up!.
"Kaito!.!.!.oh its you!"Naomi said smiling!.Kaito walked up to her and offered to walk her to school!. "Sure,I would love it!."Naomi replied!. "Hey Kaito!?"Naomi asked!. "Yeah!?"he said staring at the girl!. "Um!.!.!.how come you!.!.!.huged me!.!."Naomi asked blushing a little!. Kaito grinned and looked up at the sky with his arms behind his head!."Because you actualy listened to me!.!.!."He said!. "No one ever wants to listen to me,i guess cuz it depresses them!.!.or they just only care about themselves!.!.!."Kaito finished!. "Naomi,when i first met you i knew you werent ike many other people!.!." "really!.!.!.!?"Naomi said turning a bright red!. Kaito closed his eyes and let the sun soak his skin!.He was beautiful,not just that but he cared for Naomi!. Naomi felt herself blush,and not just that she felt something else!.!.!.
'OH NO!MY TAIL!'Naomi thought in a panic,she quickly heled onto her bell and focused!.Her tail disapeard!."phew!.!."naomi whispered to herself!. Naomi and Kaito had just walked into the school,when of cousre Yumi scared Naomi half to death!.!.!."HI NAO!!!!!"Yumi said jumping on Naomi from behind!. "How come you didnt call me yesturday!?"Yumi said still on top of Naomi's back!. "I feel asleep!.!.NOW GET OF ME!"Naomi said angrly,but giggling a little bit!. "sorry,buuuut guess what!?NEW STUDENTS!" Yumi grabbed Naomi and dragged them both to class!.
"Today,we are going to meet some very special new students!"Said Sensei Mizuki!. "These are two exchange students all the way from America!We had them in a class that taught them japanese so feel free to speak with them anytime!.Welcome Carolyn and Steven!."She said!. "Oh please call me Karorinu,I love my name in japanese!."Carolyn said,she seemed kinda shy!. "Same for me,call me Suchibu!."Steve said!. "Ok,well please give a welcome to Karorinu-chan and Suchibu-kun!" Everyones eyes were fixed on the two,they were different but gorgeous at the same time!.!.!.Naomi even had her eyes fixed on them!.Karorinu had the most beautiful orange hair she had ever seen,she was so used to dark hair seeing her hair was kind of shocking!.And Suchibu had the most beautiful eyes,so blue and so clear!.!.!. It seemed Kaito didnt really seem to care,he just sat there writing in a red and black notebook!.'What if Kaito saw me!.!.I hope I didnt hurt his feelings!.!.!.'Naomi thought!. Suchibu and Karorinu were about to take their seats,Karorinu had a seat in the middle a row of desks away from Naomi!.But Suchibu was 3 desks away from Naomi!.Just as Suchibu walked past Naomi he brushed her hand with his long slim fingers,he looked at Naomi,smiling he winked at her!.Naomi just sat there,confused!.She looked at Kaito,he quickly stopped looking at her and went back to lookng in his book!.He ripped out a page and set it back in his book!. Naomi felt her face turn red again,she didnt know what was happening but she wasnt sure she liked it!.!.!.!.!.!.
~To be continued in part 2 chapter 4~Www@Enter-QA@Com
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hmm!.!.!. i dont really no what to say for this one!.!.!. but i liked it! it seemed realistic and i could see myself watching this on the tv and i like how u decided to put it on a sortof cliffhanger there!
i will give this a 9 coz it made me laugh! wen naomi was talking to yumi then suddenly yells yumi to get off! lolWww@Enter-QA@Com
hmm!.!.!. i dont really no what to say for this one!.!.!. but i liked it! it seemed realistic and i could see myself watching this on the tv and i like how u decided to put it on a sortof cliffhanger there!
i will give this a 9 coz it made me laugh! wen naomi was talking to yumi then suddenly yells yumi to get off! lolWww@Enter-QA@Com
got bored and lost in the first few sentences so i didn't finishWww@Enter-QA@Com
not orginalWww@Enter-QA@Com