Does this sound like a good manga storyline?!
Question: Does this sound like a good manga storyline!?
tell me if this sounds good
note* all character names have not been finalized
title: in progress*
genre: harem action fantasy
main characters :
renji
renji is a typical high school student!. light brown hair and eyes!.
human-no powers(at first)
female character 1:
blood red hair and eyes- vampire
female character 2;
water blue eyes and hair -water nymph-
female character 3:
earth brown eyes black hair-mage
female character 4
n/a werewolf (will develop later on in the series)
villains
no specific
basic plot
starts off with renji in the principals office remanicing about why he is there( fight with other student)!. after flash back he gets expelled!. he is then forced by his parents in to an accadamy for special students (which unknown to them is a school for magical creatures)!. the story unravels as he befriends other students (female, hence harem)!.they continue with magical school life untill he is bullied by others because he is just a human and is then protected by his female friends because he has no powers!.this makes him feel insignificant and the turning point occurs he distences himself from his friends due to his no power situation and runs away and !.!.!.!.!.!. well thats giving to much away!. but it turns out good in the end!. its only in a nut shell and not finalized so don't ask stuff like whats the title or what are the girls names!. i will post awnsers to any questions please don't be to harsh!. sorry for the spelling!.
arigato bosaimasu for reading (thank you) Www@Enter-QA@Com
note* all character names have not been finalized
title: in progress*
genre: harem action fantasy
main characters :
renji
renji is a typical high school student!. light brown hair and eyes!.
human-no powers(at first)
female character 1:
blood red hair and eyes- vampire
female character 2;
water blue eyes and hair -water nymph-
female character 3:
earth brown eyes black hair-mage
female character 4
n/a werewolf (will develop later on in the series)
villains
no specific
basic plot
starts off with renji in the principals office remanicing about why he is there( fight with other student)!. after flash back he gets expelled!. he is then forced by his parents in to an accadamy for special students (which unknown to them is a school for magical creatures)!. the story unravels as he befriends other students (female, hence harem)!.they continue with magical school life untill he is bullied by others because he is just a human and is then protected by his female friends because he has no powers!.this makes him feel insignificant and the turning point occurs he distences himself from his friends due to his no power situation and runs away and !.!.!.!.!.!. well thats giving to much away!. but it turns out good in the end!. its only in a nut shell and not finalized so don't ask stuff like whats the title or what are the girls names!. i will post awnsers to any questions please don't be to harsh!. sorry for the spelling!.
arigato bosaimasu for reading (thank you) Www@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
It does have potential!. Once you have worked out the more important kinks that plague any writer, I think I would be willing to read what you have written!. The storyline fits into a genre perfectly (if that is what you are trying to do) and will unravel (in a good, catchy writer way) to the reader of your tale!.
By the way, Great job coming up with your own and not some fan fiction!. I am so tired of seeing so many being written it makes me sick to the stomach!. Some is okay but the overflow is just too much to deal with!.
Keep working on your story!. I am certain it will be a valid success in the Manga and/or Anime world many have discovered!.
GOOD LUCK AND GOOD START
domo arigato for writing something original!. Www@Enter-QA@Com
By the way, Great job coming up with your own and not some fan fiction!. I am so tired of seeing so many being written it makes me sick to the stomach!. Some is okay but the overflow is just too much to deal with!.
Keep working on your story!. I am certain it will be a valid success in the Manga and/or Anime world many have discovered!.
GOOD LUCK AND GOOD START
domo arigato for writing something original!. Www@Enter-QA@Com
Eh!.!.!. it doesn't strike me since it's more of a girly theme!.
men are supposed to be strong and protective cool-headed and emotionless!. making him super-dependent on women doesn't attract the mass populous your trying to attain!.
oh and it doesn't sound like naruto!.!.!.
good luck tho!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
men are supposed to be strong and protective cool-headed and emotionless!. making him super-dependent on women doesn't attract the mass populous your trying to attain!.
oh and it doesn't sound like naruto!.!.!.
good luck tho!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
No!. Try to write something that isn't just an "insert yourself" fantasy!.
also, using japanese terminology while speaking english does not make you cool!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
also, using japanese terminology while speaking english does not make you cool!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
The story is already taken!. Check out Rosario + Vampire Www@Enter-QA@Com
it good but have some tight out fitand big jug just playin bework on the story lineWww@Enter-QA@Com
I like it!. :)Www@Enter-QA@Com