I want your opinions on my song and my poems?!
Question:
I want your opinions on my song and my poems?
Here is a song I "wrote", or constructed might be more politically correct. It took me about 5 months, to make it perfect, adding things here and there about once every week. I think it sounds great coming from a 17 year old kid without any music education. Though, I have been playing the Tuba for 3 years. I also play the piano by ear, which is very helpful. I can pretty much play anything I hear. The song is pretty simple, 2 stalves, 1 piano, and an exact copy in strings to make it less plain. Tell me what you think:
http://profile.myspace.com/wiltzandrewmu...
Well, now about the poems. Ive been writing poems on and off for about 5 years now. My first one is Horror of 9/11, which I had to write as a class project. My latest one is Armageddon, which took me a while. I had to read Revelations 2 times to get a full understanding. I think it about sums it up, too. I think Hate was my first good poem though. Tell me what you think:
-Andrew
http://www.andrewspoemwebsite.blogspot.c...
Answers:
they are ok but could do with some work!