First one to critique my new vid gets best answer!?!

First one to critique my new vid gets best answer!?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4jgca_axk...

I made this a few years back and had to tape the tv screen to get it on my computer. So the quality kind of sucks. I would have done the continuity better if I had waited untill now to do the video. I was just starting out and having fun. Now I'm in film school. Subscribe to me! Please!

I thought I'd comment on here too. I'm new to Youtube, and I saw you video, so I did subscribe to you. I thought it was pretty funny, and well done for someone filming unexperienced kids I suspect, lol!