Would you please review my song? Please?!

Would you please review my song? Please?

The song I want reviewed is called "The Angel", and is on my page:

http://www.myspace.com/theskyespectacula...

Or if you would rather look it up yourself, my Myspace ID is=

theskyespectacular

I assure you this isn't SPAM. I am just trying to figure out which of my songs I am going to have as my first single on my album coming out in December.

Anywho, what you are going to hear is a DEMO. Yes, this isn't the finished product, just a decent recording I made on my computer with my acoustic guitar and a computer dynamic microphone, but I think it is tolerable. Did you like it? Hate it? Why? I am looking for more of a music review, not a critique on how bad the quality is, I already know. What would you rate it? What would you like more of? Less of? This is your chance to be a critic for a few minutes! I will not get angry about negative reviews, I need as much help as I can!

Also, if you liked it, a friend request or some word of mouth would be nice! Thank you all so much!

1 month ago
My own personal review of the song:

By the way, the song isn't an instrumental.

Yes, the intro is long. Reason why? I am a little sentimental as to how the song was originally written. The first part of the song (before it gets to the chords) is how the intro was originally written, and the intro plus the chords is how my rhythm guitar likes to play it. However, my rhythm guitarist had no part in the recording, I recorded it all by myself and just layered the guitar parts. If the rhythm ever appears to be off, it's probably because I was too distracted trying to play rhythm and sing at the same time.

I give the musical performance good marks.

A lot of you are calling me out on this. Yes, I am not singing on the demo like I normally would. I was recording this late at night when everyone in my place was sleeping, so I gave the mic a decibel boost and sang at normal talking volume. I would say the vocals are in tune and precise, but lack my traditional volume and clarity.

honestly, the guitar playing is great, the rythm is great. but the vocals aren't. im not trying to be mean, the vocals arent bad,they just arent good. is sounds like whoever is singing isn't using their diaphram. or maybe the pitch/tone of it isnt right. sorry to be harsh, u wanted the truth.