Poem, plz tell me wat u think!?!

Poem, plz tell me wat u think!?

We sat at the table
Holding out trophies
Kicking out kleets agains our legs
You smile at me
I giggle at your mistake
Then it all ends
I pack up my bat bag
You throw one last pitch
I smile at you
You smile at me
That was the end
Of our fantasy

2 months ago
U GUYS THIS IS ABOUT BASEBALL NOT SOFTBALL

Charming. Really charming. Please put them all in a blog. It's hard to imagine you're not sad when you've written your little poems.

Don't listen to any of the abusers. Every dear work has its own critics. You write with sincere emotion, and its very contemporary, a fine example of (adolescent?) emotions.