Can people out there tell me what they think of this song/poem?!

Can people out there tell me what they think of this song/poem?

Can you plz tell me what you think mabye rate it 1-10 and go easy i made it in 5 min i know it is ryme and i like it because it is catchy.


Choose Me


If god would choose me now i'ld be in the ground,
devil would take my soul throw it in a big black hole,
i can see it now in the ground in a big black hole,
watching my sins go bye makes me wanna cry.

If god would choose me now id be in the ground,
devil would drink my sins with a big fat grin,
watching in the hole devil holding my soul,
wished i'ld listen then not to sin,
i can remeber it now with a frown people telling me not to sin,
me lauging with a grin.

If god would chooose me now id be in the ground,
because of my sins there would be no more grins,
I would burn for my sins,
heres my message now dont end up in the ground ask to forgive your sins,
so there would be no more grins.

If god would choose me now id be in the ground

I am also a poet. Any poem is good in it's own way. I just don't understand why the... darkness of it. I just hope that it does not reflect where you are in life cause life is good. Challenging but good. No one is perfect. Many pretend to be but no one is. It's not your sins you"ll be judged on but what you did all the way to the end. And by the way, there is no devil. God is a forgiving father. No one burns in hell.... Trust me. I'll send you one of my poems if you like. It's not better than yours just different. Keep writing.