What do you think of the story I wrote?!
Question:
What do you think of the story I wrote?
Its only half of the first and last page.
http://fw54.members.freewebs.com/members...
Out of ten please.
Answers:
its good! obviously depends on what the middle bit was like and what your are writing it for (i.e. school, book, fun etc) as to what the mark out of 10 is.
A few typos in there, here is the last paragraph corrected:
Killing him. SCREAMING. Crying. I blinked out of it. I heard a lever PULL, I screamed and I -. At the moment Asher Bennington, a young boy of 15. Was dead.