Hey, what do you think of this? is it good?!
Question: hey, a friend and i have made a song and are just wondering what people think of it. dont take any of it seriously, its just really random and i wanted to see if it has any potential
I am a gangster
I’m a gangster, I’m a straight up G, the gangster life is the life for me
Shooting people by day, selling drugs by night, being a gangster is hella tight
I walk around town with a stark erection, then gave your mom a yeast infection
I saw the policeman and I punched him in the eye, to serve and protect, what a lie
I also don’t like white people, you shouldn’t too, and don’t get me started about the Jews
I’m a gangster, grr I’m mad, I’m a gangster, my rhymes are bad
I’m a gangster, I’m iced out like a freezer, I’m a gangster, I don’t listen to Weezer
I dropped out of school at the age of 3 'why' cause all the teachers tried to player hate on me 'oh'
My rhymes are cool, just like doing cocaine; my rhymes are hot, like a burning flame
Sisqo is my hommie, he's a gangster too, me and Sisqo are the leaders of the gangster crew
I like to be in jail and he likes to sing and dance 'yea', some say we're the perfect match
"Step off, step back, step away! Step back, don’t step forward...step back! Don’t step forward step
Backwards, backwards, don’t step to me, do not step...to...me! Grrrrrrr"
I’m giving a shout out to my hommies in cell block 8,
Being in jail sucks cause you always have to masturbate
Except when a Jewish person goes to jail, all my hommies cheer,
They will make mincemeat out of his rear
Ben Petty helped me make the gangster beat to the song,
I shot him in the face cause he looked at me wrong
I’m a gangster, I drop bombs like Hiroshima, I’m a gangster,
***** suck on my wiener, I’m a gangster,
I drive a cool car, I’m a gangster, I smoke weed and a cigar,
Yo, my gangster flow, yo, yo yo yo.....yo, uh uh…
End of song
so...what you think?
Answers: hey, a friend and i have made a song and are just wondering what people think of it. dont take any of it seriously, its just really random and i wanted to see if it has any potential
I am a gangster
I’m a gangster, I’m a straight up G, the gangster life is the life for me
Shooting people by day, selling drugs by night, being a gangster is hella tight
I walk around town with a stark erection, then gave your mom a yeast infection
I saw the policeman and I punched him in the eye, to serve and protect, what a lie
I also don’t like white people, you shouldn’t too, and don’t get me started about the Jews
I’m a gangster, grr I’m mad, I’m a gangster, my rhymes are bad
I’m a gangster, I’m iced out like a freezer, I’m a gangster, I don’t listen to Weezer
I dropped out of school at the age of 3 'why' cause all the teachers tried to player hate on me 'oh'
My rhymes are cool, just like doing cocaine; my rhymes are hot, like a burning flame
Sisqo is my hommie, he's a gangster too, me and Sisqo are the leaders of the gangster crew
I like to be in jail and he likes to sing and dance 'yea', some say we're the perfect match
"Step off, step back, step away! Step back, don’t step forward...step back! Don’t step forward step
Backwards, backwards, don’t step to me, do not step...to...me! Grrrrrrr"
I’m giving a shout out to my hommies in cell block 8,
Being in jail sucks cause you always have to masturbate
Except when a Jewish person goes to jail, all my hommies cheer,
They will make mincemeat out of his rear
Ben Petty helped me make the gangster beat to the song,
I shot him in the face cause he looked at me wrong
I’m a gangster, I drop bombs like Hiroshima, I’m a gangster,
***** suck on my wiener, I’m a gangster,
I drive a cool car, I’m a gangster, I smoke weed and a cigar,
Yo, my gangster flow, yo, yo yo yo.....yo, uh uh…
End of song
so...what you think?
You asked for an opinion, and in MY OPNION...
It's bad, its really, really bad. It's so unbelievably bad i don't even know where to begin.
This genre of hip hop is so tired. I will glad when the fad ends.
you lost me at yeast infection sooo wrong!