Is my writing/lyrics good, or does it need some work?!
Question: This is really the first time I have shown anyone my writing. Is it good? Advice and anything that I could add would be helpful :]
She'll stand alone, alone with herself.
She'll cry, but nobody will listen,
She'll run, but nobody will follow.
She's vulnerable,
so push her down, watch her fall, and walk away.
She'll cry, she'll scream,
but at the end of the day,
she knows she'll be okay.
So push her down, watch her fall, and walk away,
but she'll stay strong anyway.
So take your best shot,
shoot straight at her heart,
push her down, watch her fall, and walk away.
Answers: This is really the first time I have shown anyone my writing. Is it good? Advice and anything that I could add would be helpful :]
She'll stand alone, alone with herself.
She'll cry, but nobody will listen,
She'll run, but nobody will follow.
She's vulnerable,
so push her down, watch her fall, and walk away.
She'll cry, she'll scream,
but at the end of the day,
she knows she'll be okay.
So push her down, watch her fall, and walk away,
but she'll stay strong anyway.
So take your best shot,
shoot straight at her heart,
push her down, watch her fall, and walk away.
its really good i love it...keep writing !