Rate this Poem 1-20?!
Question: My friend wites a lot of random stuff, so how good is it?
Late every other night,
When nowt is bright,
Then he appears,
But no-one fears
The Stalker of the Streets.
No-one loves, No-one hates,
No-one knows, No-one cares,
No-one hears, No-one sees
The Stalker Of The Streets.
Striding down the alley-way,
Walking past dogs a-stay,
Down though the cul-de-sacs,
Over several train tracks,
goes the Stalker of the Streets.
No-one loves, No-one hates,
No-one knows, No-one cares,
No-one hears, No-one sees
The Stalker Of The Streets.
A girl, one day, late from work,
As a night time hotel clerk,
She walks down though the streets,
There an innocent girl, she meets
The Stalker Of The Streets.
Of strangers she does fear,
To her over the road he veers,
When he pulls out a pointed knife,
Desperately she ran for her life
Down thought the Streets.
Answers: My friend wites a lot of random stuff, so how good is it?
Late every other night,
When nowt is bright,
Then he appears,
But no-one fears
The Stalker of the Streets.
No-one loves, No-one hates,
No-one knows, No-one cares,
No-one hears, No-one sees
The Stalker Of The Streets.
Striding down the alley-way,
Walking past dogs a-stay,
Down though the cul-de-sacs,
Over several train tracks,
goes the Stalker of the Streets.
No-one loves, No-one hates,
No-one knows, No-one cares,
No-one hears, No-one sees
The Stalker Of The Streets.
A girl, one day, late from work,
As a night time hotel clerk,
She walks down though the streets,
There an innocent girl, she meets
The Stalker Of The Streets.
Of strangers she does fear,
To her over the road he veers,
When he pulls out a pointed knife,
Desperately she ran for her life
Down thought the Streets.
It's good... I hope you don't mind me making a suggestion, but I think in the line "Over several train tracks", it might be better as "Over several rail-road tracks", only because of the rythm, it would flow better the second way.
As for a rating... well, that's kind of hard, but from 1-20 I'd say it's a 17, points off for the rythm :-p
Otherwise, though, it's good. Tell your friend to keep it up.
I can't really rate it because I don't care for the content of the poem But you seem as though you do write well.
100?