Whatz your honest opinion on my poem?!


Question: BORN WITHOUT A DESTINY

I came 2 this world with one name 2 tell
Born without a destiny but not free
Because I’ve been on a path for hell
Never been given ecstasy you see

Haters devise plans against me
It’s like what do they got against me
They don’t understand the man I am
I go through hell again and again

I walk a fine line with no time
Straight forward with no destination
I have no map written on my mind
I’m just exploring the dark cold nation

My future is untold its yet 2 unfold
I walk through utter darkness freely
This life I live just seems so cold
Born without a destiny


Answers: BORN WITHOUT A DESTINY

I came 2 this world with one name 2 tell
Born without a destiny but not free
Because I’ve been on a path for hell
Never been given ecstasy you see

Haters devise plans against me
It’s like what do they got against me
They don’t understand the man I am
I go through hell again and again

I walk a fine line with no time
Straight forward with no destination
I have no map written on my mind
I’m just exploring the dark cold nation

My future is untold its yet 2 unfold
I walk through utter darkness freely
This life I live just seems so cold
Born without a destiny

It's nice, but very paranoid and depressing to me.
I hope you feel better after getting those feeling off your chest.

wonderful!

please answer my question:
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Moving and honest

We feel your pain

But we are confused about if you really would rather HAVE a destiny. One given to you at birth? Is that what you want?



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