Wrote a song just wanted to kno what people thought of it... please be honest?!
Question: Do remember the first night i saw you
You were in that pretty red dress
I went over to say Hi and you gave me smile
and when i asked you out you said yes
Do you remeber our very first date
It was at the movie theater one night
when we got to you house i gave you your first kiss
then you smiled under the moon light
do you remember our very first fight
it was the worst night of my life
i thought it was over but then i realized i loved you
and that cant be stoped by a little strife
that is a verse that i wrote today during class... just want to kno what other people think
Answers: Do remember the first night i saw you
You were in that pretty red dress
I went over to say Hi and you gave me smile
and when i asked you out you said yes
Do you remeber our very first date
It was at the movie theater one night
when we got to you house i gave you your first kiss
then you smiled under the moon light
do you remember our very first fight
it was the worst night of my life
i thought it was over but then i realized i loved you
and that cant be stoped by a little strife
that is a verse that i wrote today during class... just want to kno what other people think
Sounds goood, why not try singing it out with some nice instrumental music at the background? and put it up on some site or youtube, so that we all could see, what exactly it would sound like... if the right tune and tone then am sure it will sound pretty neat and nice :)
otherwise yes its nice :) great going buddy!
it sounds good it would help if I heard it but overall its good,good job:)