What are your thoughts on this poem that i wrote???!


Question: YOU

I look at them and how they remind me of you
I then stare back into the past
Where time seemed to go by so fast.
Everyday without you brings me to a low,
But I cannot show that low.

I miss you!

I miss your kiss
I miss your smile
I miss your eyes
I miss your touch

Most of all I miss your love!

Coming back into the present
I find I resent
Myself for letting you go
Without you it’s a fact
They my life is one big act.

It is your love I lack
So please, please, please come back!

I love you!

I love your kiss
I love your smile
I love your eyes
I love your touch

Most of all I love your you!

By,
Tyler Gardner


Answers: YOU

I look at them and how they remind me of you
I then stare back into the past
Where time seemed to go by so fast.
Everyday without you brings me to a low,
But I cannot show that low.

I miss you!

I miss your kiss
I miss your smile
I miss your eyes
I miss your touch

Most of all I miss your love!

Coming back into the present
I find I resent
Myself for letting you go
Without you it’s a fact
They my life is one big act.

It is your love I lack
So please, please, please come back!

I love you!

I love your kiss
I love your smile
I love your eyes
I love your touch

Most of all I love your you!

By,
Tyler Gardner

It's really good, but the

"Everyday without you brings me to a low,
But I cannot show that low"

That part is a little confusing i guess.
it sounds like your repeating the sentance/line but in a diffrent matter of words.

But its really good!

It kind of sounds like a healing poem. Writing is a great form of expression to heal old wounds and to just express your feelings. I think that any form of expression is great. Everyone expresses in their own way and their is no right and wrong. I would say KEEP EXPRESSING. It does wonders for the soul.

To learn more about healing through expression,
visit http://www.self-healingexpressions.com



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