What do u think of this story i wrote?!
Question: http://www.booksie.com/memoir/short_stor...
please be honest, n im sorry about the grammar.
Answers: http://www.booksie.com/memoir/short_stor...
please be honest, n im sorry about the grammar.
Wow. That was a really good story. For your sake, I hope it isn’t true. I had a shitty family life, not the drug part, but the feeling like crap part, and described it well. I enjoyed it, even though it made me a little sad. But then again, that is what a story is all about, the sharing of feelings.
wow! i would read that if you published it! is it a true story? and is it your true story? you had a lot of voice in this and it was very believable.
I LOVE IT!
i sware i do!
i like stories that are kinda sad and depressing.
i don't know why.
i guess b/c those are the most meaningful ones.
It was beautiful!
wow! thats brilliant
seriously, did you make this up or was it real? well, it doesnt matter. it is still good even if its real or not. i'd rate 8/10. the other two [sorry] was because it wasnt long enough!!! i wana no more! wuts gona happen next? will you make another one? if u are, im so gonna be the FIRST person to read it!!!!!! =] you should be a story writter.
i didn't think this was one of the greatest things ive ever read and what was the point of the story there wasnt any purpose or meaning was it to entertain because i wasnt laughing
I think I read this and commented... you have a story to write... keep on... it will hone your skills.
That is a really good story