What do you think of my fanfic? Please read it and tell me it very short?!


Question: What do you think of my fanfic!? Please read it and tell me it very short!?
Dawson stood at the window looking out at the town below him, than he stroked Joey his *****!. Joey's penis was getting hard so Dawson rubbed it raw with a cheesegrater causing Joey to ejaculate, his semen landing on Dawson face!. "mmm nothing quite lie it" Dawson said as he licked the semen form his face!. "I brewed it special just for you Dawson" Joey said with a nervous giggle!. "How about some fun with electricity" dawson asked!. So Joey hooked up some electric jumper cables to dawson's nipples and then hit the power switch!. Electricity went through Dawson's body dawson moned and writhed in an extacy of pain and pleasure, his penis growing harder byt he second!. when it was over he left for work, his job was a s a highly paid executive!.

When he got home form work 5 hours later that night Joey had prepared a special surprise for him, dawson walked in his door and was surprised to see the dining room table prepared for what looked to be an elegant meal!. The good silver was on the table and two places were prepared one for dawson and one for Joey!. But the food had'nt been served yet and the plates were empty!. Dawosn sat down in one of the cairs witha smile on his face anticipating a special meal!. "Im glad your home dawson coz this meal is one that you aint never had before!" Joey said!. He walked to dawson with the meal witch had one of those silver lids over it so dawson could not see what was on the plate!. "Are you ready for something real special!?" Joey asked with a smile!. "Voila!" Joey said as took the cover off of the plate revealing a large pile of human feces on it!. "Oh wow" Dawson said i have never eaten human feces before!" "I know thats why I htought it would be such a lovely surprise" Joey said with a grin!. So Joey and dawson ate the feces as best they could!. By the end of the meal their face were smeared brown and they were struggling not to vomit!. Than Dawson pulled out a large wipped and flayed the skin from Joey's back till Joey collapsed with pain and pleasure!. Than Dawson retired for the night on his large kingsized bed while Joey lay writhing on the marble tiles of the kitchen floor, in agony but happy that he satisfied his master for another dayWww@Enter-QA@Com


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LMAO!.!.!.!.ITS DIFFERENT!.!.!.!.!.!.!.BUT VARIETY IS THE SPICE OF LIFE RITE!?!?!?=-}
NOT PERSONALLY SOMETHING I WOULD DO!.!.!.!.BUT I LUV UR CREATIVITY=-}Www@Enter-QA@Com

You have a gr8 imaginationWww@Enter-QA@Com

I read about 2 sentences and decided it wasn't worth going further!. But to each his own!.Www@Enter-QA@Com



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