What u think of m poem?!
Question: What u think of m poem!?
i love ur gentle smile,
i love ur tender touch
and i love ur kisses
so very very much!.
i love the way u flirt with me
and the way u laugh and tease!.
i love the way u always find
the nicest ways 2 please!.
i love the way u cheer me up
when u find me with a frown
and always raise my spirits
when life has got me down!.
i love u 4 ur patience
and ur true sincerity
and most of all i love u
for the way that u love me!
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i love ur tender touch
and i love ur kisses
so very very much!.
i love the way u flirt with me
and the way u laugh and tease!.
i love the way u always find
the nicest ways 2 please!.
i love the way u cheer me up
when u find me with a frown
and always raise my spirits
when life has got me down!.
i love u 4 ur patience
and ur true sincerity
and most of all i love u
for the way that u love me!
star if u like!Www@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
it warms my soul - thank you for sharingWww@Enter-QA@Com
It is very sweet, but as a poem it has a greater effect if you change it as follows,
i hate ur gentle smile,
i hate ur tender touch
and i hate ur kisses
so very very much!.
i hate the way u flirt with me
and the way u laugh and tease!.
I hate the way u always find
the nicest ways 2 please!.
i hate the way u cheer me up
when u find me with a frown
and always raise my spirits
when life has got me down!.
i hate u 4 ur patience
and ur true sincerity
and most of all i hate u
for the way that u hate me!
your opinion!?Www@Enter-QA@Com
i hate ur gentle smile,
i hate ur tender touch
and i hate ur kisses
so very very much!.
i hate the way u flirt with me
and the way u laugh and tease!.
I hate the way u always find
the nicest ways 2 please!.
i hate the way u cheer me up
when u find me with a frown
and always raise my spirits
when life has got me down!.
i hate u 4 ur patience
and ur true sincerity
and most of all i hate u
for the way that u hate me!
your opinion!?Www@Enter-QA@Com
Very well written!. Should post it on the internet!. Liked it a lot!. Who ever it is for is in for a very nice supprise!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
If its from your heart I think its always beautiful !.!.!.!.poems dont always have to rhyme and sound beautiful as long as you put ur heart in it its GREAT!!!Www@Enter-QA@Com
i like it!.
i love the way u always find
the nicest ways 2 please
that part sounds sexual!.
but i love it!Www@Enter-QA@Com
i love the way u always find
the nicest ways 2 please
that part sounds sexual!.
but i love it!Www@Enter-QA@Com
I enjoyed your poem a lot!. You have a beautiful spirit and a lot of talent!. Keep it up!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
im flattered, this is nice it"s wonderful it's wonderful, i wish i was your boyfriend, wait you are a girl right!?Www@Enter-QA@Com
awesomeWww@Enter-QA@Com
boring!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Www@Enter-QA@Com
Copyright that girl!!!
Hallmark will pay you for that next valentines day to put it in thier cards ! very good!.!.!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Hallmark will pay you for that next valentines day to put it in thier cards ! very good!.!.!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
It might be better if you wrote it in normal English!
I'll give you an 'A' for effort but the actual poem!.!.!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
I'll give you an 'A' for effort but the actual poem!.!.!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Yay i like itWww@Enter-QA@Com
perfect, almost add more detailsWww@Enter-QA@Com
I thought it was very romantic&Sweet!!! Very nice work!!!!Www@Enter-QA@Com
its really gud!.!.!. i like it and if it is for anyone they r very lucky!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
awww!.!.!.!.!. so cuteWww@Enter-QA@Com
thats nice well doneWww@Enter-QA@Com
its poorWww@Enter-QA@Com
i love it :o)Www@Enter-QA@Com
its cute huni xxWww@Enter-QA@Com
Its great u should contact carlton cards etc and see if they wanna buy the rights!Www@Enter-QA@Com