*** do you think this song is good..? =] x ***?!
Question: *** do you think this song is good!.!.!? =] x ***!?
i recently made up a song, i'm only 12 but i think im good at singing and quite good at songwriting, but what do you think of this song i made up the other day!? it isn't to do with my life of anything, don't get the impression, lol!. it's not quite finished yet I maybe need to add an extra verse or something!. it's called Everyday -
everyday, my love gets stronger for you
every place, that we went to and what we did too
every love, has been all the same, not true
but everyday, my love gets stronger for you!.!.
(instrumental)
i know that you don't love me and you never will again
but you were oh so true to me and that i won't forget
i love you ( i love you )
everyday, my love gets stronger for you
every place, that we went to and what we did too
every love, has been all the same, not true
but everyday, my love gets stronger for you!.!.
so what do you think!? please comment, tarr =] xWww@Enter-QA@Com
everyday, my love gets stronger for you
every place, that we went to and what we did too
every love, has been all the same, not true
but everyday, my love gets stronger for you!.!.
(instrumental)
i know that you don't love me and you never will again
but you were oh so true to me and that i won't forget
i love you ( i love you )
everyday, my love gets stronger for you
every place, that we went to and what we did too
every love, has been all the same, not true
but everyday, my love gets stronger for you!.!.
so what do you think!? please comment, tarr =] xWww@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
:) Pretty good :) Make it longer for sure, but you're doing great!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Pretty good, sweetie!. That one line in the refrain is kind of awkward though!. This one: every love, has been all the same, not true!. You might want to rephrase that or something!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
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