Easy Points Here!! Please answer.?!


Question: Easy Points Here!! Please answer!.!?
I wrote a poem for my gf who has been mad bummed!. Is it good!?

I know that family problems can be rough
And dealing with it is always tough
I just want you to know I understand
And that I am always here to hold you hand
I am not mad but I miss you like crazy
I just keep thinking about my baby
I love you so much and you know its true
My world revolves around nothing but you
Forever and ever in my arms
I love your heart, soul, smile, and charm
You are so hot, I cannot lie
I love that I am you number one guy
You make me smile everyday
Baby please never take my sun away
I will always be here to help you get through
Because baby, I am so in love with you

Dedicated to my gf of 8 months today!. She has been having family issues!. lol!. That any good!?Www@Enter-QA@Com


Answers:
it is absolutely amazing :)
you're gf is def the luckiest girl ever!!
and happy eight months btw, love you soooo much!.Www@Enter-QA@Com

That is a very beautiful poem!. Really it is, I wish there were more guys out there like you that cared this deeply!. I would change the "your so hot" to your so beautiful!. Girls do like when their called hot, but we love it when a guy calls us beautiful and means it!. This is a very cute poem and I'm happy that you've found someone that makes you feel this way!. Even though I don't know you!.Www@Enter-QA@Com

That brought tears to MY eyes!. Excellent!!!!!! That would get published or it should and it would make a great song!!Www@Enter-QA@Com

Dude, you are so gonna get laid!.!.!.Www@Enter-QA@Com

Very good!. Has she read it yet!? She will love it!.Www@Enter-QA@Com

Sounds pretty good to me - it flows nicely!.Www@Enter-QA@Com

Yes - give it to her!. Girls love this stuff!.Www@Enter-QA@Com

that is the sweetest thing!. i love it!.Www@Enter-QA@Com

Good job mate, i'm sure your gf would be touchedWww@Enter-QA@Com

the best poems i have seen so far on hereWww@Enter-QA@Com

aww cuteWww@Enter-QA@Com

aww thats so sweet!.
i'm sure she'll love it! (:Www@Enter-QA@Com

yes!. i wish someone would write me a poem like that!. that was very sweet!.Www@Enter-QA@Com



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