Is it worth it continuing this novel?!
Question: Is it worth it continuing this novel!?
Alright!.!.!. so I started to write a novel!.!.!. it's a little long, but PLEASE read it!.!.!. I will give 10 points for best answer, and I could also use the criticism!.
I was never really good at detecting when friendships were over!. Me and my best friend Lauren fought like a married couple- it’s what made us us!. Our fights were always over dramatic, and usually ended after days, sometimes weeks of not talking, and bashing each other to anyone who would listen!. Afterwards, we would tell each other next time that next time would be different!. We would tell each other how silly it is to fight, and that life is too short!. But those few days, or weeks before our reconciliations, we would genuinely hate each other!. As for who apologized first, it was usually her!. Its not that I was never in the wrong, I was just too stubborn to admit I was!. Sometimes we would call one another to ask who was mad at whom, and for what bizarre reason, these phone calls would end in late night bus rides to the park in which we would get wasted out of our minds and talk for hours!.
Sometimes, our fights were for legitimate reasons, those ones were the worst, because even after resolved, and they were always resolved, it still took a toll on our friendship!. In fights, these situations always surfaced!. Some pretty hateful things were said between us, but that’s the way we were to each other, sure I hated her, but on a good day, I loved her a thousand times more than I ever hated her on the worst days!. But something about this fight felt different!. She was mad at me, and I was mad at her for not picking up the phone!. She assumed, like always, that I had something stupid and meaningless to say!. But what I had to say was the most meaningful thing that ever escaped my lips, and what she responded, I will always remember!. Nothing could ever take those words away!. When I told her how her boyfriend brutally raped me, she said, and I quote, “You deserved more than that!.”
I guess for this story to make any sense, I must start where all stories start, at the beginning!. Our friendship was a complicated one, I use complicated for lack of a better word!. She always wanted what I had and I always believed I deserved better than what I had, which she interpreted as me believing I was better than her!. I guess in a way I did believe I was better than her, in some ways I believe I still am!. Our history wasn’t a long and sordid tale, and it isn’t anything amazing!. We were acquaintances most of high school, but through the mutual hatred of our friend Jill, we became closer!. The summer before grade twelve was our time!. We owned that summer; sleepovers, amusement parks, late night drunken escapades that we always forgot the next morning!. We were teenagers, we were inseparable, and we were loving every minute of it!.
Grade twelve was supposed to mean something fantastic!. Prom, graduation, university acceptance letters… it was my year to shine, and for the most part I did!. Lauren and I spent too much time together, bashing girls that were prettier than us, and dissing the boys who were too stupid to realize that we could easily be the best thing that ever happened to them!. The first major fight we ever had is the one I remember most vividly!. Our friend Will was turning 17 and his party was supposed to be the party of the year!. It turned out to completely suck, so me, Lauren and our friend David went to David’s house to get drunk, and watch movies!. I didn’t really want to go considering the fact that David was my ex-boyfriend who I was still madly in love with, but Lauren convinced me to go anyways!.
The night ended with them having sex on his kitchen floor, while I sat in the living room watching some stupid movie about teenagers in love!. We called a cab and left, but not before she begged him to consider dating her, while he just continued to tell her that it was a one off, and it didn’t mean anything!. Once inside the cab, she lashed out at me, blaming me for the whole incident, and singlehandedly claiming the role of victim!. I wasn’t in the mood for her bullshit, so I got out of the cab and called my own!. The next two weeks were brutal!. Not only did I have to deal with the fact that my best friend slept with the only guy I ever loved, but also that she blamed me for the incident!. Basically, she was telling me that I inflicted the worst pain I’d ever felt on myself!. I was not going to take that lying down!. So of course, I did what any teenage girl would do… I got even!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
I was never really good at detecting when friendships were over!. Me and my best friend Lauren fought like a married couple- it’s what made us us!. Our fights were always over dramatic, and usually ended after days, sometimes weeks of not talking, and bashing each other to anyone who would listen!. Afterwards, we would tell each other next time that next time would be different!. We would tell each other how silly it is to fight, and that life is too short!. But those few days, or weeks before our reconciliations, we would genuinely hate each other!. As for who apologized first, it was usually her!. Its not that I was never in the wrong, I was just too stubborn to admit I was!. Sometimes we would call one another to ask who was mad at whom, and for what bizarre reason, these phone calls would end in late night bus rides to the park in which we would get wasted out of our minds and talk for hours!.
Sometimes, our fights were for legitimate reasons, those ones were the worst, because even after resolved, and they were always resolved, it still took a toll on our friendship!. In fights, these situations always surfaced!. Some pretty hateful things were said between us, but that’s the way we were to each other, sure I hated her, but on a good day, I loved her a thousand times more than I ever hated her on the worst days!. But something about this fight felt different!. She was mad at me, and I was mad at her for not picking up the phone!. She assumed, like always, that I had something stupid and meaningless to say!. But what I had to say was the most meaningful thing that ever escaped my lips, and what she responded, I will always remember!. Nothing could ever take those words away!. When I told her how her boyfriend brutally raped me, she said, and I quote, “You deserved more than that!.”
I guess for this story to make any sense, I must start where all stories start, at the beginning!. Our friendship was a complicated one, I use complicated for lack of a better word!. She always wanted what I had and I always believed I deserved better than what I had, which she interpreted as me believing I was better than her!. I guess in a way I did believe I was better than her, in some ways I believe I still am!. Our history wasn’t a long and sordid tale, and it isn’t anything amazing!. We were acquaintances most of high school, but through the mutual hatred of our friend Jill, we became closer!. The summer before grade twelve was our time!. We owned that summer; sleepovers, amusement parks, late night drunken escapades that we always forgot the next morning!. We were teenagers, we were inseparable, and we were loving every minute of it!.
Grade twelve was supposed to mean something fantastic!. Prom, graduation, university acceptance letters… it was my year to shine, and for the most part I did!. Lauren and I spent too much time together, bashing girls that were prettier than us, and dissing the boys who were too stupid to realize that we could easily be the best thing that ever happened to them!. The first major fight we ever had is the one I remember most vividly!. Our friend Will was turning 17 and his party was supposed to be the party of the year!. It turned out to completely suck, so me, Lauren and our friend David went to David’s house to get drunk, and watch movies!. I didn’t really want to go considering the fact that David was my ex-boyfriend who I was still madly in love with, but Lauren convinced me to go anyways!.
The night ended with them having sex on his kitchen floor, while I sat in the living room watching some stupid movie about teenagers in love!. We called a cab and left, but not before she begged him to consider dating her, while he just continued to tell her that it was a one off, and it didn’t mean anything!. Once inside the cab, she lashed out at me, blaming me for the whole incident, and singlehandedly claiming the role of victim!. I wasn’t in the mood for her bullshit, so I got out of the cab and called my own!. The next two weeks were brutal!. Not only did I have to deal with the fact that my best friend slept with the only guy I ever loved, but also that she blamed me for the incident!. Basically, she was telling me that I inflicted the worst pain I’d ever felt on myself!. I was not going to take that lying down!. So of course, I did what any teenage girl would do… I got even!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
it's great, you should defiantly keep going!.
this is exactly the kind of book i would read!.
and for the part you put on the back!.
( that short summary on the back of all the books)
you should use this
"Not only did I have to deal with the fact that my best friend slept with the only guy I ever loved, but also that she blamed me for the incident!. Basically, she was telling me that I inflicted the worst pain I’d ever felt on myself!. I was not going to take that lying down!. So of course, I did what any teenage girl would do… I got even!."
a lot of books start off dull, and people often put them down!.
but this beginning is great!.
it'll keep readers hooked =]
dont stop!.
good luck!.
and when this book is published,
ill for sure buy it =]Www@Enter-QA@Com
this is exactly the kind of book i would read!.
and for the part you put on the back!.
( that short summary on the back of all the books)
you should use this
"Not only did I have to deal with the fact that my best friend slept with the only guy I ever loved, but also that she blamed me for the incident!. Basically, she was telling me that I inflicted the worst pain I’d ever felt on myself!. I was not going to take that lying down!. So of course, I did what any teenage girl would do… I got even!."
a lot of books start off dull, and people often put them down!.
but this beginning is great!.
it'll keep readers hooked =]
dont stop!.
good luck!.
and when this book is published,
ill for sure buy it =]Www@Enter-QA@Com
Yes, keep going, I'm already hooked! I think it's an amazing beginning!Www@Enter-QA@Com
Very interesting and good writing, a little sad though but I think thats the point!. I wish I could read more :)Www@Enter-QA@Com
I agree, this is awesome, keep going i want morreeeee
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it's like every other teenage story!. i geuss it's okay, but cecily von zeigler(sorry forgot how to spell it) already did the same sorta thing!. try making it more unique :)Www@Enter-QA@Com
Of course!!! Just try to separate your paragraphs a little more with each separate thought, and you will be on your way! Keep writing!. The inspiration CAN! go away!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
It sounds really interesting, i haven't read anything like it!.
but, for some reason, i have a feeling somebody may have already wrote something simaler to that!. but i think you should keep going, nonetheless(:Www@Enter-QA@Com
but, for some reason, i have a feeling somebody may have already wrote something simaler to that!. but i think you should keep going, nonetheless(:Www@Enter-QA@Com