Need opinion!!!!!!!!!!!?!
Question:
Need opinion!!!!!!!!!!!?
my cousin told my i right good free verse poetry and i need an opinion here is my latest poem
the rain comes down
it hits my face
it cleans me
it cleans my soul
the rain
washes the trouble away
it cleans the air
it washes the grass
and brings freashness
to everything
it thunders
lightnings
rains harder
just to make it cleaner
and clearer
washes everthing away
2 weeks ago
sry its in the wrong section thats what yahoo answers put it in don't blame me and cut me a break people i am only 14 and just started righting
2 weeks ago
also IT ISN'T SUPPOSED TO RYME IT IS FREE VERSE POETRY thank you very much
Answers:
Very Good! You have talent! I like the depth of your poem! The soul is eternal! Blessings!!!