What do you think of this poem? i wrote it.?!
Question: sun upon my flowing long hair,in the wind it drifts in air.golden tulips, surrounded i, me swimming i want to cry.life too beautiful, life so here, my eyes water, i shed a tear.birds in the atmosphere, a sign from God to stop all fear.then i see, his orange brown hair, his tall graceful self, pleasingly fair.my lover, i see, his soft pink lips, his deep set eyes, his paleless cheeks.he hold me, a drifting self, not together, still afloat.he holds my hands, he make me feel queer.he picks me up, we go off, our love together,never stopped.
Answers: sun upon my flowing long hair,in the wind it drifts in air.golden tulips, surrounded i, me swimming i want to cry.life too beautiful, life so here, my eyes water, i shed a tear.birds in the atmosphere, a sign from God to stop all fear.then i see, his orange brown hair, his tall graceful self, pleasingly fair.my lover, i see, his soft pink lips, his deep set eyes, his paleless cheeks.he hold me, a drifting self, not together, still afloat.he holds my hands, he make me feel queer.he picks me up, we go off, our love together,never stopped.
AWWWWW!!!!!!!!! i love it! its such a sweet poem! i wish i could write like that! ;)
Sorry, wrong area.
thats really romantic
its really good
but wrong section
oo la la
nice