Please Rate My Poem 1-10 1-Being Bad 10 Being Great and leave any comments?!
Question: The Polar Bear
There once was a bear who lived all alone
He was white He was brave He was proud
He lived in the snow up near the north pole
With a sign saying no Visitors Allowed
Down deep in his cave he would sleep every night
Outside he would hunt everyday
He did most of the things that polar bears do
He was keen on the polar bear way
But then one night up on a hill
On a hill that was not very far
He could hear music and laughter and cheer
And could see lights that were as bright as a star
So off he went to explore this light
To find out what was disturbing his sleep
And what he found was something profound
Something so very unique
For up on the hill was a village of elves
And a man who was jolly and round
The bears eyes open wide as he saw the man
Who he thought was dressed up like a clown
Next he saw deer and a big wooden sleigh
And a man that was made out of snow
There was houses made out of cookies
And a reindeer whose nose had a glow
Look For 2nd post
Answers: The Polar Bear
There once was a bear who lived all alone
He was white He was brave He was proud
He lived in the snow up near the north pole
With a sign saying no Visitors Allowed
Down deep in his cave he would sleep every night
Outside he would hunt everyday
He did most of the things that polar bears do
He was keen on the polar bear way
But then one night up on a hill
On a hill that was not very far
He could hear music and laughter and cheer
And could see lights that were as bright as a star
So off he went to explore this light
To find out what was disturbing his sleep
And what he found was something profound
Something so very unique
For up on the hill was a village of elves
And a man who was jolly and round
The bears eyes open wide as he saw the man
Who he thought was dressed up like a clown
Next he saw deer and a big wooden sleigh
And a man that was made out of snow
There was houses made out of cookies
And a reindeer whose nose had a glow
Look For 2nd post
i like it so far. so a 10 for this part
I give it a SOLID 8!!!
Ill be waiting for that second post...
i rate this poem a 7.
A good Christmas poem
rate an eight because it was pretty great!
7
I give this part a 9 out of 10.