What do ya think about this poem its called sad cholo?!
Question: A SAD CHOLO ONCE CRIED, SU CORAZON HAS DIED.
A HYNA HE ONCE HAD, LEFT HIM FEELING SAD.
AT NIGHT HE LOOKS UP AT THE SKY
HE TRIES TO HIDE HIS SADNESS BY GETTING HIGH.
HE PUTS HIS CUETE TO HIS HEAD
THINKIN HE WAS BETTER DEAD,
HE PUTZ IN HIS DIP, TAKES ANOTHER HIT,
A TEAR GOES DOWN HIS FACE,
AS HE HOLDS THE GUN IN PLACE, HE PULLS.
THE TRIGGER THE BULLET CUTS THROUGH LIKE A KNIVE,
HE LAYS IN A PUDDLE OF BLOOD,
HE HAS TAKEN HIS LIFE, HE WROTE A NOTE,
AND PUT IT IN HIS HAND,
TELLING HER HE THOUGHT HE WAS HER ONLY MAN
I SAW THE NOTE AND TOOK THIS QUOTE:
THIS IS WHAT IT READ, "THIS BLOOD I SHED, IS FROM A BULLET TO THE HEAD OVER AND OVER I CRIED AND CRIED, WITH ME ALL OUR MEMORIES HAVE DIED, OUR LOVE I TRIED TO SAVE IT DID NOT HAPPEN SO I TAKE IT WITH ME TO THE GRAVE
Answers: A SAD CHOLO ONCE CRIED, SU CORAZON HAS DIED.
A HYNA HE ONCE HAD, LEFT HIM FEELING SAD.
AT NIGHT HE LOOKS UP AT THE SKY
HE TRIES TO HIDE HIS SADNESS BY GETTING HIGH.
HE PUTS HIS CUETE TO HIS HEAD
THINKIN HE WAS BETTER DEAD,
HE PUTZ IN HIS DIP, TAKES ANOTHER HIT,
A TEAR GOES DOWN HIS FACE,
AS HE HOLDS THE GUN IN PLACE, HE PULLS.
THE TRIGGER THE BULLET CUTS THROUGH LIKE A KNIVE,
HE LAYS IN A PUDDLE OF BLOOD,
HE HAS TAKEN HIS LIFE, HE WROTE A NOTE,
AND PUT IT IN HIS HAND,
TELLING HER HE THOUGHT HE WAS HER ONLY MAN
I SAW THE NOTE AND TOOK THIS QUOTE:
THIS IS WHAT IT READ, "THIS BLOOD I SHED, IS FROM A BULLET TO THE HEAD OVER AND OVER I CRIED AND CRIED, WITH ME ALL OUR MEMORIES HAVE DIED, OUR LOVE I TRIED TO SAVE IT DID NOT HAPPEN SO I TAKE IT WITH ME TO THE GRAVE
dang girl, your good....
Poem is okay, but try not typing in all caps please... it's hard on the eyes.
Nice
eh its ok
its a very good poem but sad but still good
*claps and claps*
that was sad and emotional
*claps and claps*
I can't fully appreciate it, must be a culture thing. It's sad, but too cliched to be truly effective. 3.5 or 4 out of 10. But thanks for sharing anyhow -- I always like to read original poetry.