Hows this freestyle?!
Question: Break ya jaw gun in mah paw im new like Bobby Creekwater but i dont roll wit Em i roll wit my pen and mah paper ill watch you ebaporate like water vapor im a caper im young but get paper this rap sh*t is hard labor f**k mah neighbor (personal) i crave a career back to mah lare mah rhymes are glorious trust me ill become notorious like the B.I.G i come off like Ali, float like a butterfly and sting like a bee, you wanna roll wit me you gotta pay the fee i stay alive yet i dont even breath my skill grows like a seed i hear you beg n' plead your gon' feel my wrath and wati this is just the beginning wait till' the aftermath
thats what i got so far
Answers: Break ya jaw gun in mah paw im new like Bobby Creekwater but i dont roll wit Em i roll wit my pen and mah paper ill watch you ebaporate like water vapor im a caper im young but get paper this rap sh*t is hard labor f**k mah neighbor (personal) i crave a career back to mah lare mah rhymes are glorious trust me ill become notorious like the B.I.G i come off like Ali, float like a butterfly and sting like a bee, you wanna roll wit me you gotta pay the fee i stay alive yet i dont even breath my skill grows like a seed i hear you beg n' plead your gon' feel my wrath and wati this is just the beginning wait till' the aftermath
thats what i got so far
i think its good but you might want to stick with the same subject not back and forth ifyou stick to the same subject it will be way better trust me
good but y rap...
It flows, but doesn't make any sense.
It's inverted and shallowly depth- enduring
you yak like a whack..don't give me no flax...you'll go six feet under way down in a sack...yo..write with a bic..forget all this shtick..and...no ..need ..to...be...*drastik*
IT okay but let me show you a thing or two
Okay heres the break down, fonna school this clown
on the block ive been around and around
sirmixafresh 2 comming quick wit game quick to slain
so move over ill show you a thing or two
first of all who is you
notorious my ***
dont compare yo self to B.I.G, you aint in his class
practice makes perfect it really is worth it
been rappin since the 5th grade so i made sure im perfect
so do this whip a notebook off the shelf and rebuild ya self
spoken poetry powerfull like plasma to ya eyez
im the new generation you realize
so sit ya *** down your seed hasnt germinated
if i said your good thats overrated
so sirmixafresh 2 has to hold the mic
cuz you know me ill rock it tight
BEASTA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1