Writing help part two. Easy 10pts?!


Question: When we are together I hide it but my body betrays me. You notice the warm cheeks and the slight smile. My eyes drift closed as I feel you kiss my cheek. I sense your passion and warmth flow through you. It passes into me with your caress. My guard falters when your around me, and it disappears completely in your embrace

Thats it honesty please


Answers: When we are together I hide it but my body betrays me. You notice the warm cheeks and the slight smile. My eyes drift closed as I feel you kiss my cheek. I sense your passion and warmth flow through you. It passes into me with your caress. My guard falters when your around me, and it disappears completely in your embrace

Thats it honesty please

i like it
it just needs to be spaced correctly so the reader reads it with it with the correct tempo

u gotta a talent

what do you want me to do?

Oh, now I understand. you're good at this! If you ever publish a book, tell me! I would buy it.

What do you want us to do?

I'm better at writing poetry.

We should get together and exchange notes, say 9 o clock Friday at my place. I'll be looking forward to our exchange.

That is tbh, a great description!

You should write a love poem or romantic story or something.
Or (if you have one) give that written down to your boyfriend! :P

wow that really is charming
how about this
when we are together i feel good but when i try to hide my whole body betrays me.you notice the warm glowing cheek and slight smile on the face.my eyes gleam as u come close and gently plant a kiss on my cheek.i sense a strong passion and thats from you.flowing with warmth through you.as it passes into me with your gentle caress.my guard falters deeply when your all around me ,and as it disappearscompletely within your embrace.....
and its that strong its hard to hold back.........
maybe using stronger words or something could help
good luck xxxxxxxxx:-)

Great! If I were a publisher I would publish it !!!



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