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Question: I help you think, but i never link
i have no brain, but something is gona drain
i fill the blank, and can be found at a bank
i may break, but only if i shake
i love to move, but i cant alone
please help me or I start to drone.

what am i


Answers: I help you think, but i never link
i have no brain, but something is gona drain
i fill the blank, and can be found at a bank
i may break, but only if i shake
i love to move, but i cant alone
please help me or I start to drone.

what am i

a pen?

a pencil?

Computer?

The line "i have no brain, but something is gona drain" could use some rewording. It doesn't fit the flow of the rhyme or the pattern. The rhyme scheme is ABCCDD... AABBCC would make more sense. The second and third lines could drop a few syllables. The first line has 9, 2nd 11, 3rd 11, 4th 9, 5th 9, 6th 8. Since (with the exception of the 1st 2 lines) you're using couplets you should make each couplet have the same number of syllables... or at least have some sort of pattern. Also gona is spelled gonna.



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