Is my book alot like Stephine Myer's Twilight?!
Question: I felt the sun beating down on my forhead as I tightly ran my hand down the glass window. I felt as if the room was spinning and I was wondering...did I really want to die this way? My green eyes reflected through the shinny glass. I looked as if I was about to be sick...no not from the sun...from the fact that I have to try to get into Kappa this year. "Hi? Melody are you in here?" Dad shuffeled through my filled boxes. "Oh dad. I was just..." He stared at me sharply. "I know what you were doing. Forget it...I don't wish to talk about it...but, I must worn you that going out into the world as a young vampiress is tough. I mean, you can't be in the sunlight like this." I met his look of despair. "I'm half mortal too. And, my mother is full mortal. So, I hope you've egnoleged the fact that I'm no longer your little baby and I can make dessions myself. Who knows? I may just...I may just...like the human life...a little." Dad smirked at me and walked closer. "Make your own dessions then.
Answers: I felt the sun beating down on my forhead as I tightly ran my hand down the glass window. I felt as if the room was spinning and I was wondering...did I really want to die this way? My green eyes reflected through the shinny glass. I looked as if I was about to be sick...no not from the sun...from the fact that I have to try to get into Kappa this year. "Hi? Melody are you in here?" Dad shuffeled through my filled boxes. "Oh dad. I was just..." He stared at me sharply. "I know what you were doing. Forget it...I don't wish to talk about it...but, I must worn you that going out into the world as a young vampiress is tough. I mean, you can't be in the sunlight like this." I met his look of despair. "I'm half mortal too. And, my mother is full mortal. So, I hope you've egnoleged the fact that I'm no longer your little baby and I can make dessions myself. Who knows? I may just...I may just...like the human life...a little." Dad smirked at me and walked closer. "Make your own dessions then.
IT was a bit like hers and a bit like your own but who is she
Too much like hers. It could be considered copying. Also, you're going to have to edit this if you want it to become something more than a question on Yahoo! Answers. Lots of spelling and grammar mistakes.