Check out some of the poems i wrote im only 12?!


Question: i do have copy write on them... i am only 12 so they might be kind of bad...
fire pit-

Fire Pit

I don’t know when
To say get a clue
A fire pit
Burning Beneath you
Light a match
Pour gasoline
As I create
My life cuisine
Drop my match
As I explore
Fire pit
You burn I sweat
No I don’t I don’t have more
The number is zero
that’s my score
- Kaitlyn





water wave-

Water Wave

As there’s change in the weather
And rocks shift together
We make
A water wave
The sun is baking
Wile kids are playing
We make a water wave
Now weather has rested
Rocks have stopped
The sun is a moon
And kids are sleeping
All because of
A Water Wave

- Kaitlyn




magic mystery



Magic mystery

I have a magic mystery
Its mysteries are a mystery
Its secrets are a secret
And I think it is my destiny
The mystery is mystic
The secret is sacred
My destiny is a magic mystery



thanks let me know what you think


Answers: i do have copy write on them... i am only 12 so they might be kind of bad...
fire pit-

Fire Pit

I don’t know when
To say get a clue
A fire pit
Burning Beneath you
Light a match
Pour gasoline
As I create
My life cuisine
Drop my match
As I explore
Fire pit
You burn I sweat
No I don’t I don’t have more
The number is zero
that’s my score
- Kaitlyn





water wave-

Water Wave

As there’s change in the weather
And rocks shift together
We make
A water wave
The sun is baking
Wile kids are playing
We make a water wave
Now weather has rested
Rocks have stopped
The sun is a moon
And kids are sleeping
All because of
A Water Wave

- Kaitlyn




magic mystery



Magic mystery

I have a magic mystery
Its mysteries are a mystery
Its secrets are a secret
And I think it is my destiny
The mystery is mystic
The secret is sacred
My destiny is a magic mystery



thanks let me know what you think

They are amazing! They sound so professional! Keep on writing, and if your school or anywhere in the community has a poetry or writing contest, YOU SHOULD TOTALLY ENTER!

Really liked the first and second although not too keen on the last.

Keep up the good work x

12 yrs are not allowed in yahoo answers. you should be minimum 14

so mr\mrs poet\poetess may i have ur autograph

Well done, you are 12 yrs old and you are all ready trying to write good poetry, you have a lot to learn and try to improve on your imagination, and try to be your self , do not copy from poets just read their work, and try to be like them,but better than them, you have to learn to to find your own style

Please try to be more expressive in your poetry and do not be afraid what you write, try and read, and learn how you use your meters, try to write a sonnet ,a ballad or an ipick poem, like that you will express your self much better,

But i must say its a good try, continue with it its nice. but try to be more clear and express your self and discribe your a picture of what you writing about, so your poem it have a sense os reality and it wont be style



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