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Question: oh yeah this isnt like a "serious" sng its ssomething for a project and its to the tune of this old man
Persephone
was all alone
till Hades spotted her and took her homE
to his underworld land
where was to stay for all eternity
Demeter wept
and no crops would grow
men wore dieing sooooo
Zeus talked his brother back to her mother forever
under the circumstance that she didnt eat the pomegranate
Persephone didnt know
so she ate some of the fruit
which meant she was Hades recruit
to be his Queen for 6 months of the year
and there was nothing Persephone could do
except cry and go BOOHOO
During this time
crops would not grow
wich is how Demeter would show
her sadness for the loss of her daughter
until the cruel six months were over
When Persephone returned home
Demeter was extremely happy
so crops would grow aplenty
and man could grow lots of crops and fill their belly
and this explains why we have seasons in the 21 century
Answers: oh yeah this isnt like a "serious" sng its ssomething for a project and its to the tune of this old man
Persephone
was all alone
till Hades spotted her and took her homE
to his underworld land
where was to stay for all eternity
Demeter wept
and no crops would grow
men wore dieing sooooo
Zeus talked his brother back to her mother forever
under the circumstance that she didnt eat the pomegranate
Persephone didnt know
so she ate some of the fruit
which meant she was Hades recruit
to be his Queen for 6 months of the year
and there was nothing Persephone could do
except cry and go BOOHOO
During this time
crops would not grow
wich is how Demeter would show
her sadness for the loss of her daughter
until the cruel six months were over
When Persephone returned home
Demeter was extremely happy
so crops would grow aplenty
and man could grow lots of crops and fill their belly
and this explains why we have seasons in the 21 century
Listen mister "zacefron" since you think that that song was stupid you are the stupid one don't be mad cause you don't have talent like her. Get over it and just answer the question.
who names somone persephone?
It's all about the Greek gods and goddesses right? I think its cool unlike the loser before me :)
i thought that that was really clever! i give that a 10/10 =)