1-10 vote on how it sounds?!


Question: 1-10 vote on how it sounds!?
read my poem and vote on how it sounds

thx

A Little Girls Dream
by: Sarah Rose- mary Goldspink
While i'm lying in my bed at night,
the moons shine fills my room with light!.
Ill dream most amazing things!.
Well i close my eyes and start to think!.
Ill think about all thats good!.
Just like all good little girls should!.
I know whats right,and what is wrong!.
I think about my favourite song!.
I am getting tired my eyes are closed!.
i stretch my legs and wiggle my toes!.
I wonder what tommorow is like!.
I hope it is not full of fright!.
I dream the dreams of little girls!.
Being happy should be the rules!.
No crime involved with any dream!.
A dream should be sweet and clean!.
I know a dream from a-z!.
I found a very special key!.Www@Enter-QA@Com


Answers:
Thank you so much for writing a RHYMING poem, so many people seem to forget about that :P
But still I just give it a 5!.5!.
Pretty good for a nine year old thoughWww@Enter-QA@Com

I like that it rhymes but the lyrics are kinda random!.!.!.!.
8Www@Enter-QA@Com

im not realy a person who reads poems for fun
!.!.!.!.!.!.!.but that was okyWww@Enter-QA@Com

8Www@Enter-QA@Com

6Www@Enter-QA@Com

not bad!. from this poem i am guessing u are about sixteen seventeen!? not too badWww@Enter-QA@Com



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