Giving an old woman some space..?!


Question: Giving an old woman some space!.!.!?
ok so like there is this old lady and she stays in a nursing home!. here 2 children (daughter and son) visit her once a while!. anyways its her birthday and her 2 children say that they will come to take her out for fresh air!. her son comes first but her daughter is late!. her son pushes her in a wheelchair and takes her out for fresh air and her puts her wheelchair next to a bench and he sits down next to her and starts a conversation!. a few minutes later she kneals forward and her son hesitates and puts a pillow behind her!. then she kneals to the right ad the son hesitates and puts a pillow on the left!. then she kneals to the left and her confused son puts a pillow on her right and she screws up her face!. her daughter then comes with a cheerful face saying ''happy birthday mum!'' and realises her mother is frowning and she asks her mum why!. ''your brother wont let me fart'' she replies sadly!.

well its pretty long!. what do you think!?Www@Enter-QA@Com


Answers:
Funneeee!!Www@Enter-QA@Com

Definitely reword it and separate the different parts of the joke!. Exposition, each different action (fresh air is one paragraph, kneeling is another), and then the punchline!. It's hard to read and that takes away from it!.

That being said, I don't think I get it!. o_O How do you kneel in a wheelchair!? And how do pillows prevent farting!?Www@Enter-QA@Com

ehhh
kinda funny bt i didnt burst out laughingWww@Enter-QA@Com

It's pretty funny, but a bit old!.!.!.!Www@Enter-QA@Com



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