Hey can you judge this for me?!

Question: Hey can you judge this for me!?
I right songs and stuff and i want to know if this is good!.

I'm standing on the corner of my past!. Feels like im treading on broken glass!. when i see you with her i fall to my knee's!. Do you like it when i hit the ground!. Do like when I feel like my hearts been ripped out!.!.!.!.!.!.Do you like it!? do you like it!? Do you like it when i cry!? I needed you!. I loved you!. And look at us now!. I walk to the edge and hope i don't fall off!. This is where i am now!. this is where i remain!. Do you like!. Do you like it!. Do you like it when i cry!? i needed you!. i loved you!. Now im on my knee's!. baby please!.

oh and by the way you better BETTER not steal this from me!!!!!
that is illegal
ok thanks =)Www@Enter-QA@Com

Yes,I like it! I love it! and I won't steal it!Www@Enter-QA@Com

It's AWESOME!!Www@Enter-QA@Com

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