Modeling question?!

Modeling question?

I want to apply to be a model at my college's magazine so i need to write my personal information and send it to the person responsible for choosing models, he's just a guy at college.. u know. so u think this mail is okay?:
Hi!!
my name is.... i'm a second semester pharmacy and biotech. student. well, i weighed myself today and found me to be 57 kg and i'm 166 cm tall. i'm not lying :D (just because they said dont lie in the notification email) I wasnt sure with picture to choose but i settled on this one.
thanks

you think its bad??

3 months ago
well, they just said to include my name, my major, weight and height so i'm nor sure :s

It sounds a little "ditsy". I'm sorry that's just how it comes accross(I'm quite sure you aren't by your field of study - I'm sure your smarter than me)

You tell a mini story about finding you wieght when I'm sure the figure is all they need. If you want to add a personal touch you should include more info about yourself to illustrate this.

There's a good chance person reading your application did not write the add, I'd leave out the lying remark for sure!!

Remember your trying to sell yourself.

Include several pictures if your not sure. And tell us about them if your stuck and want a personal touch.

Good Luck too!