Do You Like My Story?!
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I am no critic nor your fan... but i see strength in your story, i sense that there can be more darma added to the story- you have the potential to make it more then just a story... good luck :-)
What I read doesn't really make me want to read anymore. Sorry, but talking on a computer is what I do in real life. I don't want to read about it.
It reminds me of a text based game...written in 2nd person?
i think it is really good for teens, could become an amazing story!