Review my music review? I need opinions please. ?!
Question: Review my music review!? I need opinions please!. !?
I'm a writer for a music website and I was assigned to write a review on Family Force 5!. After going to the show last night, this is the review I have come up with!. I'm not sure if I like it though!. I think it is funny insome parts but may be a bit confusing to read, because as you will be able to see I have a scattered train of thought that is obvious in my writing, this may be a good or a bad thing!. So tell me what you think!. Should I send it into my boss, or delete it and start again!? I appreciate any comments, opinions and suggestions, thanks!.
What do you get when you combine Christian crunk music, silver hulk gloves and a passionate love for mullets!? A nice heaping dose of Family Force 5, that’s what!.
After waiting in line for a bit over an hour (as you might be able to tell I have a strong distaste for lines, and waiting in them) we got inside the venue!. The band was playing at Xtreme Wheels, and the show we where about to see was “xtreme” to say the least!.
As the show began we were greeted from the stage by the red haired lead singer of Ultraviolet Sound!. Their performance was brilliant, as were the other bands to follow; Play Radio Play, and Danger Radio!. (give me some time, I’ll be able to think of something witty to say about the radio thing!.)
Then it happened; the moment that separates the men from the boys, the soldiers from the civilians, the lovers from the fighters!. (not really but it was quite exciting) The lights dimmed and then they brightened, temporarily blinding the people in the front row, but no need to feel sorry for them, they where about to witness one of the best shows in their lives!. The members of the band ran out onto the stage, wearing tight silver and black outfits, which Solomon, the lead singer claimed, “haven’t been washed in three weeks!.” The clothing made them look more likely to be flying a glamorous space-ship in the year 3025, but they still looked cool nevertheless!.
The entire show was full of violent synth sounds, a heavy drumbeat, strong vocals and the comical stylings of all the band members and the random men that kept running on stage and dancing every now and again!. After the first few songs something must have overheated because there was talk of a little back stage fire, but it didn’t disrupt the show!.
All in all the show was fantastic and lively, the bands passion and talent for music and live performances was obvious!. The other three bands touring with FF5 were also talented and put on a brilliant show, lets just say after last night I’ve have made a few more band adds on myspace!. But I’m afraid that I’ve got some good news, and some bad news for you!. The bad news!? I still haven’t thought of anything witty to say about the whole radio scenario!. The good news!? FF5’s CD “Dance or Die” is out now, and is probably available in a store near you!. So go and buy it, you’ll be glad you did!. Www@Enter-QA@Com
What do you get when you combine Christian crunk music, silver hulk gloves and a passionate love for mullets!? A nice heaping dose of Family Force 5, that’s what!.
After waiting in line for a bit over an hour (as you might be able to tell I have a strong distaste for lines, and waiting in them) we got inside the venue!. The band was playing at Xtreme Wheels, and the show we where about to see was “xtreme” to say the least!.
As the show began we were greeted from the stage by the red haired lead singer of Ultraviolet Sound!. Their performance was brilliant, as were the other bands to follow; Play Radio Play, and Danger Radio!. (give me some time, I’ll be able to think of something witty to say about the radio thing!.)
Then it happened; the moment that separates the men from the boys, the soldiers from the civilians, the lovers from the fighters!. (not really but it was quite exciting) The lights dimmed and then they brightened, temporarily blinding the people in the front row, but no need to feel sorry for them, they where about to witness one of the best shows in their lives!. The members of the band ran out onto the stage, wearing tight silver and black outfits, which Solomon, the lead singer claimed, “haven’t been washed in three weeks!.” The clothing made them look more likely to be flying a glamorous space-ship in the year 3025, but they still looked cool nevertheless!.
The entire show was full of violent synth sounds, a heavy drumbeat, strong vocals and the comical stylings of all the band members and the random men that kept running on stage and dancing every now and again!. After the first few songs something must have overheated because there was talk of a little back stage fire, but it didn’t disrupt the show!.
All in all the show was fantastic and lively, the bands passion and talent for music and live performances was obvious!. The other three bands touring with FF5 were also talented and put on a brilliant show, lets just say after last night I’ve have made a few more band adds on myspace!. But I’m afraid that I’ve got some good news, and some bad news for you!. The bad news!? I still haven’t thought of anything witty to say about the whole radio scenario!. The good news!? FF5’s CD “Dance or Die” is out now, and is probably available in a store near you!. So go and buy it, you’ll be glad you did!. Www@Enter-QA@Com
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I didn't even know christian crunk music existed!
i thought it was pretty good, witty and well written!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
i thought it was pretty good, witty and well written!.Www@Enter-QA@Com